Red roses of pain

The memories of the sun and pain

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Pain of the roses part two

The sun was dying in the blading reddish orange that left it mark in the clouds.the road ahead was full of traffic as Kyle rested is tired arms on the wheel of his black convertible its soft roof aways as the the dying Suns warmth hit his fingertips. It was a confutable warm that spread though his body. Though it didn't reach his heart, the black abyss that had grown over the time since his trip to the look out point this hair fell over his forehead as he rested his eyes by the side of the road.

The painful memory's flashed before his eyes the feeling gripping at his chest. He had come home, his mother came to greet him as she aways had. The women's eyes where green like his and hair was some shade of blond. A smile was cross her face as expecting something it pained him to tell the truth too her. It was her dream he would find a girl like Annabel, kind gentle though he found out that was just a Ploy. He pulled a smile onto his face and smiled back at the loving women. "Hey mom" Kyle spoke cheerily his voice hiding the pain as he pressed his lips to her cheek in greeting.
" how did it go" she look up to him with her eyes full of excitement and questions. He look down to her a and his smile grew. But she knew it was fake. the women could tell but she left it and spoke lovingly" come dinners ready" the word from his mother smooth and soothing. It broke his will and followed her it to the kitchen. The kitchen like every other room in the house was in a Victorian style. It was stunning but it was lost on him why she chose this style.

The meal was soundless, nether of the two spoke the wasn't a need to speak. She new what had happen on instinct, though she didn't know what exactly happen. It pained her to see her son like this, it was a good thing that he started to see people and she had thought this girl would be the one to stay this her son. Amy knew her son so she left it. The meal didn't last long as she started to clean up Kyle look to her seeing if his was needed but she looked at him softly. Slowly he moved from his seat and spoke" thanks for the food" he moved out of the kitchen. it pained him that was true but he held strong as he turn into the living room the couch, it was there they had many sessions of well. He couldn't bring himself to say. This was the first they kissed because she said she was shy to do it in public. Turning away from the couch and the memory's it held it was like a leach was sucking his heart out when he laid his eyes on it. HIs teen heart couldn't handle it. Kyle turn on foot and left the room. Turning his dejected eyes to the stairs that lead basement it was a place of good memory's as he looked at the wooden door that was showing it age . It looked a lot like his heart with the many knots though the hard surface. 'Though the doors solid and my hearts not thought Kyle'

Walk down from the door that look more like his heart then he'd liked. The hall was lined with pictures of his family smiling so care-freely as the problems weren't the there. His older sister looked more like the girl that had broken his heart it hurt. With her curly hair and natural blue eyes. It was like looking into a mirror thought his seventeen year old heart pick the similarities. His walk though the hall was quick but not so quick that he noticed the photo that hung on the wall of him and Annabel the look so happy. Clenching his eyes closed he looked like a small scared child.
The noise from the TV hid the late sobs from his throat as he made his way to room.
The room was messy that was the left of his problems. Her clothes lay on the floor though they never had sex which he was glad for know, Kyle knew he would see Annabel again soon if not at school it would be at his door. The walls held posters of his favorite band and pictures of girls in bathing suit and some in nothing at all. Though these failed in comparison to his ex. His bed the four post where made out of strong timber. The blankets looked messy like a Sheep's wool.
Dropping on the bed and pulling his phone out from his pocket his finger held over his message app. It strained his fingers but his heart wavered. Falling under strain his finger clicked the app and his message from Annabel came up. It staring him in the face. The word where cruel after that afternoon. Slowly deselected the message. His eyes fell and his body gave into sleep.
His heart numbed that day but was worse was what came after. The thought broke his rest as sat back up from his steering wheel. What came after changed his view completely of her, of Annabel. Her actions were cruel and remorseless. He sat in his car seat on the road out of town the traffic was minimal and laughed at the sun as it set and took the warmth away. Like every thing else that was taken in the aftermath of, well torture delivered by teens. They had his most secret of journals he thought of the dams book as a curse know and no more a blessing. It contained this like poems and secret thought he had. The book ruined his life in the small town. The posted pages around school the poems that he had worked hard to write

. He could remember when looked at notice board to find a poem he wrote and some of his thoughts.the halls where abuzz with noise as student ran past him his friend of four years by his side. Kyle looked more or less the same as normal his clothes hung of his body in a very unfaltering ways as people eyed him as they walk. Small groups of people gathered together. The Lino under his feet squeaked in his feet as the Drew close to one of the many bulletin boards around the school. Moving though the many body's that surrounded the board. The board was green that the first thing that Kyle noticed and the white paper that stood out. After skimming the the page is face turned white as any cloud that floated in the day sky on a sunny day. His anger flared as he ripped the page from the board violently he knew what they took it hurt what had he done to deserve this . Kyle turned on his heels and made his way out from the crowd his eyes scanned the hall his green eyes fell of the girl. His blood was boiling as he made his way to her. She was with her friends, a group of three. One was blond haired blue eyed girl that stood out in all social circle he couldn't remember her name though he couldn't remember ether of her friends names the black hair girl had teal eyes. His steps slowed and a glare entered his eyes as the closer he got. He was taller then her and she would know it today he thought.
" hello Annabel" he spoke emotionlessly as he arrived a head of her. His voice must have caught her off guard as her face formed a look of surprise.
"Hello Kyle having a nice day" she quickly recovered as she looked up at him the few inches that separated them. He ached his head to her friends a look of confusion crossed there features, like they where looking at a wild animal.
He spoke low and emotionlessly as he glared at her his anger slowly subsiding to form the numb feeling that was his heart.
"Well I was until I found what you took" his voice cold as any blizzard he took a breath as he looked done to her. Annabel for all her wealth didn't know how he knew what she had. Stepping closer to her and lower his head to her ear. He said his final words wisely as to not to scare a small rabbit and that how he saw her know a small rabbit that would run given the chance.
" so had it back, and I will stop making a scene" he pause and broke down her name and it slowly "Anna...bel" the look of the scared rabbit appeared and she was sifting thought the book until she handed it to me. The look of the scared rabbit stood there stoned to the ground.

Kyle look back to the road ahead of him the feeling of numbness grew from that day on. People found out who wrote what was on those pages and it began all so many things. So looking back at the road he was leaving the small town of lake fields and heading toward the city away from his troubled senior year . The numbness would stay the though as he turned the key and the car came to life this would be the last time in this town hopefully as he drove of the sun dying and turn into the night.