small and sweet,
crimson and tart,
in an instant i'm swept off my feet
with an indescribable feeling in my heart
your flavor is addicting despite burning my tongue
i could be allergic but i can't get enough.
please, i hope you feel the same, even if it goes unsung
i pray your seasonality is just a silly protective bluff
but eventually you rip me from my stem with your bare hands
when its only in my nature to be gentle with yours
you take bites so big and i can't understand
if we're connected, then why am i the one left with these open sores
i let you eat from me, with no restraints
i chew and swallow no complaints
your tasty sheen is a perfectly crafted ruse
your flavor is truly bitter under your bruise
i try to look past and eat from the good parts
but your spoilage affects me too
you sink your teeth into me like darts
then spit me out when you decide your through
you take all of me until there's no more
until my scuffed pit out for all to view
and yours is rotten but still cared for
cant you tell that when you reach the pit there's nothing left for you to chew?
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ok this one has a completely diff vibes from the last... but anyways, this one is deff my best so far, its about my shitty ex LMAO
ty <3
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what rhymes with orange? | poetry comp
Poetrymy friend got me into writing poetry so I thought I'd drop it here for funzies criticism accepted! enjoy lol :3