01 .Mata ?? (Rewritten one)

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In kusukshetra battlefield, the great enemy of Aryavart is standing face to face, ready to kill each other. On one side stood karna the unknown child of Suryadev while on the other side stood Arjun the child of Indradev. The atmosphere between them is so tensed but.... 

(our mann mohan is relaxed as a deadly war is going to stop today and a beautiful love story will take place in the land of aryan's )

Soon, the war between them started both of them used  deadly weapons Aajun was chanting mantra for Anjalika Astra and on other hand Karna was chanting mantan for Sharanga Astra  before anyone of them could use the Astra devi kunti came in between them and said

Kunti: (in worried and panic voice) no puto, pleuse don't

Arjun: Mata you are protecting the person who killed my son. (Abhimanyu), you's grandson and more over he had taken on oath to kill your sons so why are you protecting him mata? Please move away (said in anger but still in respecting manner)

Kunti :Putr, he didn't take oath to kill you my putr instead he took oath to protect you all.

Seeing devi kunti, in the battlefield pandavas except arjun came followed by upapandavas, duryodhan and all.

Arjun :Mata, what nonsense is this suta putr will protect us?

Kunti :I. I am the

Karnbrother ...,. don't mata

Kunti: let me putr, other wise I will suffer form this pain 

Kunti took a deep breath and started narrating everything and there was a pin drop silence and kunti decided to break it

Kunti : I  don't know what you all will say but karn is your elder brother . Eldest of all kuruvanshi and 

Krishna :( in mind) and the person hwho have right to the thrown of hastinapur 

Arjun: Mata ,I ...I I was going to do a sin by killing my elder brother ( Arjun's and rest of the pandavas eyes started to fill )

Karna: Arjun noting was your your mistake or mine ,so please hold yourself

Yudhishtira: don't know if we have right or not but still asking you can we call u bhrata ??

Karna : hmmm if this is the thing that you are so worried then let me tell you its yes but in one condition

Nakul : condition?

Sahadev: what's the condition??

Karna : (smiled) A hug from my brothers 

Pandavas smiled and went for hug but then karna said

Karn : Hmm droyodhan and all need a special invitation or what huh ? ( said in fake anger tone) 

Ashwathama :- Aree nahi nahi , I want a hug  

Karn : then what are you waiting for huh? Come 

 As soon as karn complete his sentence duryodhan ,ashwathama , dusashan and or Mann mohan ran for hug 

Seeing them devi kunti and upapadavas,laxman  became happy 

Duryodhan: bus if u said this earlier to me alone , without wastinfg of time mitr.. Sorry bhrta krna would have been samrat already

Kunti: what had happened is already done putr 

laxman: Kaka shree Yudhishtira

Yudishatir: Yes putr

Laxman:- can't we stop this war now 

Yurdishatir: Vasudev he is right can't we stop this war?

Krishn:- This should be the decision of daupadi not mine cause she is the one who sto suffer so much.

Karn:- Keshav is right & now lets go to our own tents and I am sure Shree would be worried for me

Arjun:- (in mind) Who is Shree?

Arjun looked at Nakul he wishpered

Arjun :- Who is Niya?

Nakul :- I don't know bhrata 

Arjun: okok stupid let's go everyone one left already




Hi there all 👋👋

I am back and for next chapter the target is 200 views and 50 votes please and I would like to say that should I write a romantic desi story plz let me know in the comments 

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