Chapter 1: Perfection Is Key

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Author's note: Hi guys, usually I don't multitask books (and I'm writing this in the night lol) but I thought it'd be nice to do another Uglydolls fanfiction while writing my TMF fanfiction. This time it is a Lou x OC (sorry Lou x Mandy shippers, I still do ship them together but I'm trying something new). Enjoy because I stayed up in the night making this for y'all.

The scanner scanned me as I stepped in. I then transformed into a doll just like the others. "Your name is Darana. You are a detective/model."

"Cool, so I'm a doll in here just like everybody here," I say to myself.

All the boys stared and marveled at me. I then grinned and winked at them. They all fell down. Huh? Must be real cute. I look in a mirror and I'm amazed myself. I have curly dark brown hair with blonde streaks mixed in, beautiful sky blue eyes, and slightly dark skin. I have to say that I'm real impressed with myself.

"So what if I like spending my time listening to actual music rather than watching that blondie trash talk people through a stupid song? It's not the end of the world if I hate Lou," an Australian accented voice pointed out.

That voice came from a girl with light orange hair in a braided crown with two strands hanging freely. Her devil red eyes were gleaming with anger.

"Relax Melody, It's not like I would ever be able to get an ugly person like you," a girl with pink hair says coolly.

"I'm at least not a mindless sycophant like you all are, Kitty," the girl, Melody, retorted back.

Kitty gasped, obviously offended. She then shut up and went along with the purple haired girl and the blue haired girl. Looks like the typical mean girls from every movie. Why was I not surprised?

"You did great defending yourself like that," I say, coming over to her.

"Thank you, they're always annoying so I try my best you know," Melody replies back.

"Who's the blondie though?"

"You're lucky those girls didn't hear you say that. Louis is the biggest jackass you have ever met. He might insult how you look, how tall, how thin you are, every single detail is monitored by him. He always finds a way to find out."

"Oh, he doesn't sound nice."

"He isn't nice at all. You must be new if you truly never heard of him. I'm Melody and I'll be your friend around here."

"Hey Moody, who's that hot chick?" a guy with spiky dark cerulean blue hair says.

"She's um," Melody starts, not knowing her name.

"Darana, but call me Dara because Darana doesn't suit me well," I say shyly.

"Right, she's Dara and Dara this is Chase. He is too dumb to do anything other than flirt."

"One thing you should know about Melody: she is the queen of sarcasm and mood. That's why I call her Moody," Chase whispers to me.

"I can hear you, Chase," Melody grumbles.

Chase simply laughs and says, "Well, someday we will get our own child to love. That's what everyone wants. We haven't got it yet but someday we will."

"Why hello Melody and Chase, who is this doll right here," a voice says, giving me the chills.

It's the blondie! Sorry, meant Lou. "I'm Darana but call me Dara. I'm new here."

I will not lie: Lou is the hottest and handsomest guy I've ever met. His eyes are sapphire blue and shine like gems. Everything about him is handsome and cute. "Like what you see?"

I blush hard and Melody says, "Only in your dreams, Louis! I will get to the big world with Chase and Dara. You can't stop me!"

"Sweetie, you'll realize soon that this will be impossible. Everyone has flaws and that is a bad thing. It needs to be flattened out and then you can have a child of your own," Lou says while grinning.

Melody pulls me and Chase by the arm and "accidently" rams into Lou. Her cheeks are red with anger, mine are red with love. I had no idea love at first sight could happen to me. Maybe I can be friends with him?


A week later


"You are too kind! You should've went ahead while they suffered!" Lou shouts out to me.

So sorry for having a "too kind" heart. I now get it that I'm not like everyone here. I am kind, caring, sweet, encouraging, accepting, everything that Lou hates. The Lou from a week ago just got meaner. Melody and Chase help me get past his criticism. They both meant it when they said we were friends. Tomorrow is the Gauntlet and I'm so excited to run it with them.

"Omg, we are going to finally go to the big world," Melody says excitedly.

"Yes girl, we are amazing and so is Chase," I say.

"Why thank you milady," Chase says in a gentleman voice.

I roll my eyes at it. The next day, I proceeded to the Gauntlet. We all waited for Melody and Chase to come up. No one came. My mind knew that something happened. Lou came over and cleared his throat. "I'm sorry to announce this but unfortunately Melody and Chase accidentally fell into the Recycling bin and is mashed into glue."

Everyone gasped. I couldn't believe it. How could they just die on me so quickly?! Lou seemed to hide a smirk by looking down. Something told me that he was the cause of this. The Gauntlet went horrible and I ended up getting messy. I had failed. Today, I had lost a lot of things. My friends, someone to love, and my confidence.

Author's note: I should probably get some sleep and write more later. Well, hope y'all enjoyed it. Don't ever do what I did which was to write a chapter in the night.

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