The Visitors

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Tom sat on the couch, staring down at his phone, worry twisting in his gut

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Tom sat on the couch, staring down at his phone, worry twisting in his gut. The screen remained stubbornly empty—no texts from Lea, no missed calls. She and her best friend, Freya, had gone on a three-day road trip, but it had been radio silence the entire time. No updates, no posts, nothing. Beside him, Dave paced the living room, running a hand through his hair, just as anxious.

“They should’ve called by now,” Tom muttered, glancing at the door as if expecting them to walk through any second. “It’s not like them.”

Dave nodded, his brow furrowed. “Freya never leaves her phone alone for more than five minutes, let alone three days. Something’s off, man. I can feel it.”

The house was too quiet. The eerie silence hung in the air like a heavy fog, making every creak of the floorboards sound too loud. Tom’s gut was screaming that something wasn’t right. But before he could dwell on the growing sense of dread, a soft knock came at the front door, snapping both men to attention.

Tom stood, heart pounding. Dave froze, looking just as surprised.

"That’s them," Tom said, feeling a rush of relief but also a strange undercurrent of fear. He crossed the room, but before opening the door, he hesitated, gripping the knob with clammy fingers.

Dave raised an eyebrow. "What are you waiting for? Open it."

With a deep breath, Tom pulled the door open.

Lea and Freya stood on the porch, their faces shadowed in the dim light. They were smiling, but it was wrong. The smiles didn’t reach their eyes, which seemed vacant, glassy even. Lea’s skin was unusually pale, her movements stiff as she stepped into the room.

“Hey, babe,” Lea greeted in a flat, monotone voice. “We missed you.”

Tom stared at her, his unease growing with every second. “We were worried,” he said slowly. “Why didn’t you call?”

Freya followed Lea inside, her movements just as unnatural. “We’re fine,” she replied, her voice eerily similar to Lea’s—light and cheerful, but completely lifeless. “Everything’s fine.”

The two women sat down on the couch, their hands clasped tightly together, still smiling that eerie, hollow smile. They exchanged a quick glance, and Tom swore he saw something flicker in Freya’s eyes—something cold and dangerous.

Dave shifted uncomfortably next to him. “You guys... seem different. Did something happen on your trip?”

Lea chuckled, but the sound was harsh and devoid of humor. “Oh, you could say that. We’ve changed.”

Freya leaned forward, her head tilting unnaturally to the side, like a doll whose neck was just a bit too loose. “We’re not... like we were before. We’ve become... something better.”

Tom took a step back, his heart pounding harder in his chest. “What do you mean?”

Lea’s head snapped towards him, her eyes wide and unblinking. “You’ll see. You’ll see soon enough.”

Before either man could react, both Lea and Freya’s heads jerked violently to the side, the sickening sound of bones cracking filling the room. Tom’s stomach lurched as he watched Lea’s neck twist grotesquely, her skin tearing open as a thick, milky-white substance began to ooze out.

“Jesus Christ!” Dave yelled, backing away.

Freya’s head snapped even further, her eyes rolling back as her jaw hung slack. More of the white, viscous fluid spilled from her mouth, her voice gurgling as she tried to speak. “It’s... time.”

In an instant, Lea’s head tore away from her body, landing on the floor with a wet thud. Her decapitated body twitched violently, the white substance spurting from the stump of her neck, drenching the floor.

Dave stumbled backward, his face pale with horror. “What the hell are they?!”

Freya’s head followed, ripping free from her body as it collapsed in a heap, twitching and spasming as the white liquid continued to pour from her stump. Both heads lay on the floor, grinning grotesquely, their mouths still moving as if they were trying to speak.

But the nightmare didn’t end there.

From the oozing stumps of their necks, something began to emerge—something that wasn’t human. Long, insect-like legs pushed their way out, followed by bloated, translucent bodies that shimmered in the dim light. The creatures crawled free of the women’s bodies, their mandibles clicking, their segmented legs skittering across the floor as they advanced toward Tom and Dave.

Tom felt bile rise in his throat as the full horror of what was happening hit him. The women they loved were gone, replaced by... these things.

“We need to get out of here!” Tom yelled, grabbing Dave by the arm and dragging him toward the back door.

The creatures screeched, their mandibles snapping as they lunged at the two men, but Tom managed to slam the door shut behind them just in time. They bolted through the backyard, running blindly into the night, their hearts pounding in their chests.

“What the hell were those things?!” Dave shouted, his voice shaking with panic.

“I don’t know,” Tom gasped, his lungs burning as they ran. “But they weren’t Lea and Freya anymore.”

Behind them, the sound of glass shattering echoed through the night. The creatures were coming.

And Tom knew, deep down, there was no escape. Not from something like that.

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