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1st Taking you home
@bellofsilence
1. **Engagement 5/5: I would cite this book as an example of what a prologue should entail. It immediately grabbed my attention and maked me want to keep reading.
2. **Clarity 5/5: The prologue is descriptive; I could feel the protagonist's emotion, see her surroundings in my mind's eye, and smell her fear. I understood what I was in for and what to expect from the book by reading the prologue.
3. **Intrigue 5/5: As I read the prologue, I wondered what she was running away from. I got the feeling that she had been held in captivity for a while. Towards the end, when she is almost caught by the captor but escapes, only to fall into an abyss, I was completely hooked.
4. **Writing Style 5/5: The prologue is rich with vivid descriptions, enhanced by well-crafted similes and metaphors.
5. **Character Introduction 5/5: The scene is adrenaline-inducing; you're already rooting for the protagonist. You get a sense of her emotions and a touch of her personality. It reveals just enough, leaving you wanting more.
6. **Relevance 5/5: The prologue effectively sets up the main themes, conflicts, or plot points that will be explored in the story
7. **Originality 5/5: The prologue stands out as a unique and compelling piece, unlike anything I've encountered on Wattpad before.
8. **Length 5/5: The prologue is of an appropriate length, providing just enough to hook the reader without overwhelming them.
9. **Impact 5/5: Definitely impactful. I think this is going to stay rent free in my head for a long time. It's as if the author has cast a spell on me with her words.
10. **Personal Enjoyment 5/5
I enjoyed reading this prologue. It had suspense, vivid descriptions, emotions—the whole shebang. In fact I enjoyed it so much I added it to my reading list.
Total: 50/50
2nd
Shadow touched
@watts_writes
1. **Engagement 4/5: The impeccable grammar and sentence construction allow the story to flow easily, making it easy to follow. It took a couple of paragraphs to capture my full attention, but after that, it kept my focus until the end.
2. **Clarity 5/5: There is excellent world-building, and the way everything is presented makes it easy to understand and follow.
3. **Intrigue 4/5: I am intrigued not just by the world this author has built but also by the way she has revealed things a little at a time, keeping my interest. The actions of the wind towards the end were surprising and served as a good hook.
4. **Writing Style 5/5: The prologue is written in a clear and accessible style, making it easy for readers to follow and understand. Excellent narration, good description, and great flow. There was more narration than dialogue, but in this case, it worked well.
5. **Character Introduction 5/5: The prologue effectively introduces the premise and key elements of the book.
6. **Relevance 5/5: The prologue effectively set up the main themes, conflicts, or plot points that will be explored in the story
7. **Originality 5/5: It's refreshing to encounter a fantasy narrative that diverges from the common tropes prevalent on this platform. This author's exploration of nature and the elements, imbued with a unique depth, sets this work apart from the typical wolf, alien, or vampire themes often found in the genre.
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RandomMy review of your book is my opinion. I only review books that I've read enough of to understand it's tone and general plot. I find it difficult to read books with grammatical errors and problems with sentence structure. So I will not be able to pr...
