Going for the kill

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Miguel's wife was going to her mother house because of the blaring fight they had just engaged in. They argued over the same thing as the blue man could see. They wanted a child and were tired of the build up hope that turned into nothing. As she stormed out the house and got into the car the blue man went for the upstairs window.

It was always kept open because Miguel always forgot to lock it not knowing that he would let in his own doom. The blue man slid into the window and went for the stairs. Miguel was headed for the beer parlor to get a heavy drink,when he seen a shadow behind the wooden shelf. He slowly headed for the shelf to see if his eyes weren't deceiving him.
The blue man walked to the hallway of the fear he had been spotted. As he approached the shelf he seen nothing and headed back to the parlor. The blue man walked to the couch and ducked,hoping to get him when he sat down. "What are you doing in my house," Miguel voice stuttered.

The blue man turned swiftly at the sudden response. "Do you remember me?"
"You have 5 seconds to get out my house before I call the police."
"Do you really think that's a good idea Miguel Reshaun Thompson"
The blue man was confident that this would be a direct kill. "I've been watching you for a while now" ,the blue man began to circle around Miguel slowly. Miguel began to cone to tears, "Please don't do this I can give you money, how much do you want I can give it to you." "I have a wife and I'm trying for a kid, you can't do this please."
The blue man had no mercy so he could choke any victim and feel no emotion. "Do you remember that short,fragile little kid that you and your friends use to pick on?" "He begged and begged you all to stop but it was just never enough was it ?!"
The blue man lunged in taking Miguel by his neck and slamming him. Miguel rolled over bolting for the phone. The blue man took out his slim, propped knife. He slashed Miguel leg enough to stop his effort in calling the police. As Miguel screamed in pain he beagn to crawl to the brown wooden coffee table,where the phone lay.

It soon began to ring;the ring filled his heart with hope. Soon after the hope was built, it was burst by a seeming knife going through his stomach. The blue man towered over him and was sure that after all these years he would get his revenge. He turned him over to look at his masterpiece. Blood was gushing from his stomach and leg and it would now be gushing fron his heart. The blue man stabbed Miguel continuously in the heart smiling each time he felt the knife go through. This was the end and he had won.
As Miguel began to blur out the voicemail came on, it was his wife. "Honey I'm sorry for screaming at you. I've just been really stressed lately,well I called to tell you I'm on my way back home and that I love you. As a tear came down Miguel's eye, he blacked out and that was it ,he was dead. The blue man wrote a "B" in blood on Miguel's head to signify that this was his doing and that he should be awarded all credit.
The blue man walked out the front door leaving blood on the knob. He walked away not leaving a trace of care,emotion, of heart. He had others to kill, and he surely ready. The more he killed, the more his heart lightened. So they better be ready, because the blue man was out for his revenge.


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⏰ Last updated: Feb 16, 2016 ⏰

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