I was looking at Grim with a disappointed look while Chirithy was just holding onto my back.
"I don't wanna be stuck here! I rather be a great mage then be stuck in a lousy forest!" Grim said with a huff. "This " lousy forest" holds something important Grim."
"That you refuse to elaborate." Jade said out of nowhere that made me jump. I hugged Grim tightly which made him scramble to get out of my hold.
I gulp as I looked away. "Nothing. Just keep walking-
(*smacks M/n away* BE GONE!)
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Ow- hey author isn't this a Halloween chapter?
(Yeah but I lost progress of it all so it went back to the beginning and now am to lazy to write more of this event)
Wha-
New M/n: Author means am getting time to shine ⭐✨
M/n: WHO ARE YOU?
New M/n: You but better
*fighting*
... Welp anyway
Uh look what's un development lol
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WOAH A REWRITE OF THIS FANFICTION WHO COULD HAVE GUESSED!? Actually who was guessing this was happening?
Okay well for the amount of times I've done creative writing in my classes I've been thinking, "My writing on this fanfiction could be better." So for a month I started to fix the back story and finally it's set and finally I actually know the direction of this writing.
Will this fanfiction be down and deleted? NO HOW COULD I KILL MY CHILD?! I love this fan fiction and pretty much still need it cause some stuff here is following into the rewrite. The, rewrite is more like a test drive, not exactly gonna get updates but once I finish one more chapter The Backstory and three prologue chapters will be published and if it's received well by you guys then my focus will shift to it and this one here will be discontinued.
Unless you all don't like it then the other one will just get little to no updates and this one will continue without problems.
But I do have one favor....
PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICISM (nice criticism). A good writer would know what they are flawed in by what their readers say, right? I want to know how you all feel of my writing and see what I can improve or what am already good at.
But be nice of this criticism okay, and if I don't get any am gonna let Skully take your presents /j
Anyway yeah me wanting criticism is like this:
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Please tell me if you guys absolutely like the rewrite or not.
It'll be published soon so until then have a good day/night/afternoon/evening!
