Judge's Review
Courtesans
by Nutukaa
· Book Cover and Aesthetics | 9/10
The cover is beautiful but feels a bit incomplete. It looks like text over an image, and the author's name is missing.
· Book Title | 8/10
While it's not entirely original, it's a bit surprising for a fantasy story.
· Description | 8/10
The description is concise, which I appreciate. However, it could include more details to better set the stage.
· Plot | 20/20
This story has a great flow, with well-written dialogues that bring out each character's personality. The third-person narration balances different perspectives, gradually revealing the mechanics of the world without relying on info dumps.
· Development | 20/20
Excellent work here! The dialogues, narrative flow, and character development are all top-notch. The character portrayals are vivid and engaging.
· Grammar | 9.5/10
No major issues noted.
· Enjoyment | 20/20
Absolutely loved it!
Overall | 94.5/100
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Courtesans - English version
RomanceDina, an eighteen-year-old elf girl, ends up in a brothel, from which she is determined to escape. Then she meets a mysterious, eccentric, handsome stranger...