READDDDDDD!!! well this is my first story on here and i started this about 2 years ago but its still in the process but i already have a lot pre written. Please constructive criticism only! I dont like haters because honestly hating my writing dosn't do anything and notice haters your comments are always BELOW my writing! haha :) Well enjoy
Not Your Typical Teen
The sun was gleaming down on me baking my every inch of skin. I couldn’t wait to get back into the water its been too long. Standing there in my navy blue bikini felt so good. “Wahoo, back in the water finally!” I thought to my self.
The water rippled as I dove smoothly into it. As I surfaced for air I heard a voice calling out…
“Hey that was great!”
My eyes shoot up to look at the dock where the mystery person is standing. I hate having people watch me when I’m swimming because I always feel self-conscious. When I notice this wasn’t any person this was David Lake! Lost of speech I thought I was going to suffocate, for the next minute that I was starring I forgot to take a breath.
“Uhh sorry to startle you, I didn’t mean to I was just coming down to the dock to swim when I noticed you up on the high dive.” He said
“Umm yeah well I Uhh like to swim...” I said stumbling over my words
“What’s your name?” He said
“Laurain” I said while my cheeks were growing red
“Well Laurain do you mind if I join you, I just got here and I’m really looking forward to relaxing.” He said with a smile
“Not at all.” I said kind of nervously while my mind was thinking ells where. “WOW I never thought I would actually meet him let alone go swimming with him, OMG he’s so sexy in swim trunks.” “Oh and he has abbs too…” My mind was racing a mile a minute.
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“Sooo… do you like swimming a lot because it looks like your really good, do you compete? ” he said as he slid into the water beside me
Again making me feel self-conscious.
“Yeah, I’m on the swim team.” I said kind of timidly
“I bet you’re surprised to see someone like me here, am I right?” He said with a smile
“Yeah, I didn’t know celebrities liked to camp” “I thought they were all caught up in the city life to see what they’re missing.” I said.
“I do now, I hope to get a chance to go canoeing soon.” “One of my friends told me it’s a lot of fun.” He said
“Hey you know what?” he said with a smirk
“What” I said with a puzzled look
“Your like the most normal person I’ve met, your not like all over me yelling my name like most of the people I know.” He said
“Haha, yeah well I am a fan but I’m not that crazy.” I said laughing
“Yah well we’ll see,” he said winking at me
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As I lay stretched out on the dock next to David Lake. My stomach kept fluttering; every time he moved or even talked to me it was a dream come true.
“Do you camp here often?” He said
“Not really just once a year. Me and my dad come up here and stay for 2 weeks.” I said
“Oh that’s cool” he said, “Well do you think you will have time to come to a party of mine?” “Its tomorrow, it’s just a get together party but it should be a lot of fun.” He said with a questioning sound in his voice
“Yeah that would be great!” I said really excited
“Ok good, and hey if you want to bring a friend along that’s cool too.” He said
“Ok gotcha.” I said laughing a little
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David’s Point of view
She is so cute, the way she smile’s, the way she laughs and even the way her light brown hair tumbles down her tanned shoulders.
“Well I better head back up to my place, Lorenzo my brother is going to wonder where I went.” “You want to come?” I said
“Yeah sure” She said sounding really excited
“Ok, my place is right over there” I said pointing over to the Cabin in the cove
“All right sounds good, but first let me go change I’ll meet you over at you place ok?” She said
“Yeah, ok.” I said
As I watched her walk up the hill over to her place, she was so cute as the swayed her hips a little.
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Laurain’s point of view
Wow I can’t believe he just invited me to his place. This is going to be awesome! What am I going to wear? Hmmm….
“Hey dad I’m home! I’m going to go over to a friends house, ok?” I said trying to sound casual
“Ok sure, be careful and be home before dinner.” He yelled back as I was going up the stairs to my room
As I crossed my room to my closet I looked out my window just I time to see David entering into his cabin.
The only problem about going to his place is not knowing what to wear. I don’t want to look like I tried to hard to impress him but I wanted to look casual but also something sexy.
After about my 3rd outfit that I tried on I finally decided on white short shorts and a navy blue Hollister shirt. With white flip-flops and my hair up in a ponytail. Lathering on deodorant, spritzing my self with coconut smelling body spray, laying on the lip-gloss, and applying some makeup I was ready.
After I grabbed my cell phone before I closed my bedroom door I felt the nerves come on because come on I’ve never met a celebrity and now I’m going to David Lake’s house! WOW it looks like a mansion!
Crossing my yard into his I was having more doubts. Gritting my teeth and bearing the nerves I walked up to the front door and rang the bell. Throwing on a cute smile before someone opened the door I was ready to face what ever happened.
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