After 27 years,
Vasusen's p.o.v,
my name is radhey adhirathnandan, parashuram shishya. I am the suta son of adhirathbaba and radhama though they are my adoptive parents. I learnt my basics from kulguru kripacharya. I also had learnt some archery from guru dronacharya but he refused to give me higher weapons due to my lineage. I sure was jealous of that prince arjuna but thank suryanaryan i grew up. I then came to lord parashuram to master archery and lied about my lineage and got cursed my bad luck. Though lord parashuram loves me of course because i am his favourite student of all, he forgived me. I didnt mind his curse knowing i was the wrong one here. But now i am seriously scared of brahims curses, i did ask forgiveness and even promised to give him 10 cows and wealth but the angry brahmin cursed me in the end for killing his cow accidently. Still sin is a sin i guess. Now why am i saying this all because...
Its the narrator pov
Ahem... sorry guys you see its difficult to keep karna in character so i only wrote the monologe because karna doesnt care though its true he was afraid of brahims and their curses. He also knew adhirath and radha were not his real parents. He was jealous of arjun but he grew up, he also praised arjuna many times. Its also true he was trained under kripacharya and dronacharya for a while.
Real vasusen pov
I am excited to meet radha maa and adhirath baba. I was about to reach hastinapur suddenly a teenage boy who had peacock feather and another teenage boy who had an plough in his hands came in sight. Felt like i know them.
The boys: pranipat bratha!
Vasusen was startled he was feeling happiness dont know.
Vasusen: pranipat may i know who you both are because i am certain you both are not normal humans rather divine beings am i right?
Both boy looked at each other and smiled. They turned towards me.
The peacock feather boy answered "yes, we are not normal because we are royals. I am vasudev krishna and he is my elder brother haldar balram".
My eyes widned the krishna and balram who were reincarnations of lord vishnu and lord shesha. Lord krishna the defeater of kans and soon to be king of dwarka. I fell and bowed to their feets.
Balram: get up bratha you are elder than us
Krishna agreed.
Vasusen: not in virtue lord balram. Its a blessing to meet you both. But werent you both learning education under guru sandipani?
Krishna: yes we are but we asked gurudev to let us travel for a while.
Vasusen: oh okay
Balram: okay its time to leave take care bratha vasusen
Krishna: take neeladitya bye
Both the brothers left while vasusen was shocked why did vasudev call him neeladitya? Its vasudev we are speaking he was certainly not lying then the divine brothers were also calling him bratha! Where is this all going?
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नीलाधिथ्या - the son of suryadhithya
Historical FictionEveryone know vasusen popularly known as karna from mahabharat. Some say he was most virtous man some say he was most vile in whole mahabharat. Some say he was one of the greatest warrior in mahabharat some say he was only a coward. So a story by me...