Chapter One: Am I... Dead...?

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"Am I... Dead...?"
Whimpers the girl as she looks at the angel... he was beautiful... his long gorgeous blonde hair and stunning blue watery like eyes... all of Neptunes waves would approve.
"Yes you are..."
His voice was as smooth as silk and almost as if it was dipped in honey... it was sweet, melodic, charming and hypnotic...
"And... your...S...Saint Peter...?"
The girl shakily asked as the Angel now acknowledged as Saint Peter nods as he holds his book and sighs.
"And you are Crystal... Crystal Cheryl...?"
The girl, Crystal nods.
"Y...yes! Th...that's me..."
Saint Peter looks at Crystal and sighs and closes his book.
"Mm... I dont know... I can't seem to find your name on my list..."
Crystal's heart skips a beat as she began to stutter.
"B...but how??? I... I've never harmed others! I've always done as the bible has asked off me!"
Saint Peter closed the book- a thud echoed the area.
"Naive little creature... dont you know that the bible isn't as innocent as it seems? Some of the bible was written from the church. It doesn't mean we want you to devote your entire mortal life to it."
Crystal stutters as Saint Peter's response but he continues.
"Now, down the hall to your left. Theres stairs. Go straight down."

The girls eyes brimmed with tears...
This couldn't be the end... could it...?
What had she done to deserve this...?
Please God... give the poor girl a sign---

"Enough!"

A voice rang out... Crystal paused in her tracks and looked towards the source of the sound...
It was... another Angel...?
Saint Peter immediately bowed his head and spoke nervously.
"B...but my lord! She merely violated some of Heavens rules I cant--"
He was cut off by the voice...

"I said enough Peter. I expected better."

Saint Peter looked down in shame as Crystal's eyes widened...
Was this entity... God...???
He looked nothing like the bible says he does... but than again when does anyone?

God looked at Crystal and spoke sternly his voice showed no hint of malice yet no hint of kindness.

"And you are Crystal Cheryl I presume?"

Crystal nods her head and speaks up.
"Y...yes sir!"
God huffed slightly amused at Crystal stumbling over her words.
"My lord... please listen--"
Saint Peter tried to reason with God again but he fell silent once he recieved a cold and harsh stare from God...
Saint Peter quieted, he had pissed off God. He was in for an earful of scolding later and preaches from the others...

God looked at Crystal once more and nodded as he raised a hand and made a motion to follow him as he turned and walked away.

"Follow me Child. We have much to discuss..."

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