Whispers In The Shadows

Attention

Hii, long time no see...kaise ho sab?

Anyway, hum soch rhe the is story ko thoda alter karne ki...not completely but kuchh kuchh toxic aur unnecessary points jiska koi lena dena na ho story se. And then add some cute moments, what say?

And agar kuchh changes na pasand aye to ap sab directly bolna...I won't do anything.

And for that, I know story ko 2 saal hogye but still agar ap sab ko kuchh aise scenes yaad ho jo ki sahi nhi h to tell me. Baki I'll change which won't be good for our Daya Sir's image. Faltu Mai humare cutie sir ko itna red flag diya tha.

But what can I say, tab immaturity thi but ab jab isko sahi track pe laa sakte hai to why not?

Chapter 1 updated version is there, read it then tell me if I should continue the updated version or previous one is better for you?

In updated version, Shivya won't be Daya's wife. Though she'll be in the story for the spice and will create drama. Besides, this is surrogate story so we'll delve much more into it unlike the previous time.

Anyway, Take care.