This is going to be my second story! In it will be turns of anger and hate, with unseen love around the corner.
It follows and orphan, as you may guess.
The story is mostly about being rejected, abandoned, hated, left behind, scorned, and abused. The orphan in this story grows to be suicidal and have a kind of mental war.
As a teenager he is fighting thoughts of murder, hate, self harm, and more.
This is only my second story, and, as a fourteen-year-old, I need some help.
I don't know when I'll publish any other parts (which will be chapters), if soon at all, but if I do and if you read them, please feel free to comment and criticize!
Every critical note helps me know what to improve!
I really hope that those of you who read anything later published enjoy it.
Like I said, I don't know when I'll publish anything else, but I hope I can have something out between December and January.
I have no idea how long it could be between parts I publish (I'm working more on my other sorry right now), but I hope that if you enjoy one, you stay for the rest.
YOU ARE READING
An Orphan's Whisper
General FictionCassian Syrota is orphaned on his fourth birthday. He had already had two (now three) foster families. He remains in the orphanage for years, until he is even a young teenager. His friends leave, he had been rejected, and now he is left with a choic...
