THE SILENCE OF THE PARK
An Emotional Story with a Surprising Ending
As she did every evening since her move to her new rental apartment, Susan strolled the short distance to the nearest park, guided by the tireless energy of her dog, Neo, an eight-month-old Spanador, a mix of Labrador and Spaniel. Neo's coat shimmered in shades of chocolate brown with caramel-like highlights around his face and paws, a comforting sight in the April sunset. The evening breeze carried a freshness that mingled with the warmth of her memories, now tinged with the sorrow of losing her sister Helen just five days ago. A cruel illness had drained Helen's vitality for over a year before finally claiming her life.
Despite the thirteen years that separated them, Susan and Helen had shared a profound bond forged through joy and sorrow. Helen had been more than a sister; in many ways, she had been like a second mother to Susan after their family curse had claimed their mother when Susan was only five years old. Now, that same illness had taken Helen too.
A shiver ran down Susan's spine as she thought about the latent possibility of sharing her sister's and mother's fate. The uncertainty surrounding those cursed genes resurfaced in her mind occasionally, making her wonder if the dreaded illness also lay dormant within her, waiting to awaken like a slumbering dragon hidden deep within a cave. Perhaps, she thought, the age difference between her and Helen had spared her for now. Who could say? Not even modern medicine had the answer.
As Susan and Neo approached the park's entrance, the setting sun painted the sky in warm orange tones, marking the end of the spring day. The park in April resembled a masterpiece painted by a 19th-century Impressionist master. Trees that had shed their leaves in winter now stood proudly, adorned with fresh green foliage. Among them, firs, pines, and cypresses stood as timeless witnesses, unaffected by the changing seasons.
Soft emerald grass carpeted the park's sandy pathways, dotted with brightly colored spring flowers—yellow, violet, blue, and white—that peeked through the greenery. The park's beauty seemed simple yet profound, offering a calm refuge in the city's chaos. In this oasis of nature nestled within the urban fabric, the songs of birds rose like a gentle symphony. Tits, chickadees, robins, and nightingales competed for attention, each contributing unique notes to a melody celebrating the day's end. Their songs seemed to honor the renewal brought by spring after winter, inviting those in the park to set aside their worries, if only for a moment.
Susan took a deep breath, filling her lungs with the fresh, clean air that, along with the birds' chorus, brought her temporary relief. At her side, Neo, ever alert and energetic, pulled eagerly on his leash, ready to explore every corner of this oasis amid the city's asphalt and concrete. Twilight descended, offering a moment of serenity and beauty that seemed to stop time itself.
Neo suddenly pulled harder on the leash, his excitement bubbling over—he had spotted a group of five cats. Their shadows stretched long in the fading light, their movements slow and deliberate. Neo, ever eager to make new friends regardless of species, let out a series of plaintive whines—a blend of excitement and a plea to join the feline gathering. Susan held tightly onto the leash attached to Neo's black harness, its reflective strips catching the last light of the day.
"Calm down, Neo," Susan said softly yet firmly, trying to temper her companion's enthusiasm. Friendly as he was, Neo didn't understand that many cats feared dogs and would not hesitate to lash out with their sharp claws. Susan gave a gentle tug on the leash, and Neo calmed down momentarily. Most of the cats scattered with typical feline indifference, but one black-and-white cat stayed behind, watching curiously from what it must have deemed a safe distance. It stood firm, unafraid of Neo, unlike its companions.
Further back, Susan noticed a man sitting on a wooden bench, his head bowed, his gaze fixed on the ground in a way that seemed almost contemplative. He appeared to be holding a small plastic bottle in his hands. From where Susan stood, she couldn't clearly see his face, but something about his posture struck her as odd. Just as Neo seemed to settle, Susan felt her phone buzz in her jacket pocket. She glanced at the screen: Melanie. Her best friend. Susan sighed softly before answering, knowing that the conversation would stir up emotions she was barely holding in check.
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THE SILENCE OF THE PARK
Mystery / ThrillerAbout this fantastic ✨ story originally written in Spanish, I will translate the chapters and parts progressively as I receive feedback from readers, including suggestions on how to improve any phrases or expressions in English. Any help or suggesti...