Ok so I'm totally re-writing this story and sorry if it shucks I haven't ever written a story before and I didn't like my last one. Im also open to any comments or ideas! : )
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" I'm just saying I was born in the wrong generation. I hate that I will never actually be able to go see a Beatle concert so I can see John Lennon." I talked bout this all the time with my friends but we could never just move off the topic of the Beatles or how we were born in the wrong generation.
"Penny stop cause if this keeps going on you will end up crying again and then we all will because I will realize I will never get to see Paul from when he was my age and then Eleanor will realize she will never see Ringo and Michelle will realize she wont get to see George at her age."
As soon as Lucy said that we all started to sniffle and try to hide that we were starting to crying. This happened all the time we were crazy obsessed Beatle fan girls that just happened to be friends. We even lived in Liverpool. But we never could get over the fact that two of the Beatles died and the other two were to old for us and to far away.
" Well maybe one day someone will invent a time machine and we can all go back to the generation we belong in and not this crappy generation."
"Michelle that is crazy time travel is to complex and it would take years to even begin to understand the concept. But it would be nice if we could my heart just aches every time I think bout George."
" That happens to all of us Eleanor your not the only one with a gigantic crush on one of the Beatles."
"Yeah I know."
We all just sat and continued to eat our lunches in silence each one of us in our own imagination thinking about the one Beatle we loved with all our hearts but I was planning something. It was a crazy idea but I was sure we could try it I mean any one of us would try or do anything to meet the Beatles. But I wasn't going to tell them yet, I would tell them after school when we all went to my house.
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