new servent to pevensie ( edmund pevensie love hate story)

the ball

i got ready to go to the ball and i had help with my dress from susan and lucy ( dress thats above)

then i went downstairs and the everyone stared at me and i didnt know if it was for my dress or if i was a songbird. ok i was being dromatic only like 10 people were looking at me and they were all boys. i was trying to find peter and stay away from edmund. i found peter and he was next to edmund and when peter saw me his mouth went open a bit but edmund didnt notice then peter hit in in the shoulder and when he looked at me his mouth was open to. i went next to them

e: hi

p and ed: hey

nice ball

ed: thank susan for that

p: i was wondering could you sing for us

e: iiiiiiiiiiiiiii dont know.......its risky

p: nonsense go on that stage and rock it

e: alright.............um edmund your drooling

man i loved teasing him and i will tease him more i have a lot planned for tonight

ed: mmmmmm? oh

then he wiped it of and went to sit somewhere

i laughed

p: what are you up to?

e: little ol me...........nothing i am 100 percent inocent

he raised an eyebrow

e: oh dont worry peter you'll still have your brother when this ball is over.

i went on stage and sang free and i could feel edmunds eyes on me the whole time and then everyone clapped and i went to go sit down for a drink.

some one came behind me and tapped my shoulder oh pls dont be edmund pls dont be edmund pls dont be

e: edmund! hi!

ed: care to dance?

e:uhhhhhhhhh of course

we went to dance and then he wanted to talk but i tried avoiding the talking

ed: soooooooooooooooooooo

e: sooooooooooooooooooo

ed: alright i had enough you shouldnt have kept a secret like that

e: oh I SHOUDLNT KEEP A SECRET LIKE THAT

ed: dont shout the people can hear you

e: yeah i dont want that to happen ( i shouted whispered)

if he wasnt going to tell me he kissed me then i have to put my plan in action

e: anyway besides that.....did i tell you you looked very handsome tonight

i put my hand on his cheeck

ed: i...........i..........uhhhhhhhhh no .........no you havent

e: well then u look very handsome tonight

i then went to the garden to meet caspian

edmund pov:

i went to the garden to follow her and then i see her and caspian and then caspian began to lean in and then so did she i couldnt watch so i went inside again

erica pov:

I DID IT YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWHOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY PLAN IS WORKING now on to part 2

i went inside and went next to peter oh and me and caspian didnt really kiss just to let you know.

edmund pov:

when i went inside she was near peter and she was laughing then she kissed him on the cheek i mean WHAT THE HECK. ERICA JUST CHOOSE A GUY NOT 2. Then she went to the wine bar and I went next to her

Erica POV:
Great Edmund is coming to talk to me yay! Plan is working great!
Ed: what do you think you are doing?!
E: going to get wine you want some?
Ed: NO I DONT WANT SOME
E: fine don't need to yell about it
Ed: why were you with Caspian and peter!
E: oh my gosh!
Ed: what?!
E: your jealous
Ed: I AM NOT
E: oh well......that to bad
And I went in the garden again
Ed: why do you always make me run after you like a love struck idiot!
E: love struck?!
I laughed
Ed: what is wrong with you
E: oh......nothing
Then I pulled his collar so he can come closer to me
E: Edmund?
Ed: yes?
He tried to back away but I wouldn't let him
E: have you ever kissed a girl before?
Ed: I........ummmmmmmm not exactly
E: are you sure
and we were millimetres apart
Ed: no in kissed you when you were asleep
I moved from him
E: good you told the truth
Ed: wait you knew?!
E: yep and the whole thing with peter and Caspian was a plan and they were in on it
Ed: oh great!
Then he hit his hand on the railing and looked down not facing me
E: what's wrong?
Ed: im Sry
E: why?
Ed: I didn't mean to kiss you I just-
E: you just what
Ed: I just don't know if I have feelings for you yet
E: well......if that's how you feel then let me try to change your mind
I turned him and got his collar and kissed him fully on the lips and then he responded quickly . we were basically making out until his tongue went in my mouth and we were french kissing then we had to pull apart for air and our foreheads were together
E: how's that?
Ed: perfect
I laughed and he did to
But then i gasped and passed out in His arms
Edmund POV:

Ed: oh no what happened
E: I......I don't know maybe the st......stiches have opened
Ed: PETER , CASPIAN
they came and saw her on the floor so they came kneeling down next to me and later Susan and Lucy came to.
S: what's going on?!
Ed: I don't know she just passed out again
E: i cant feel anything!
P: Erica I want you to relax
C: LUCY USE your CORdIAL
she used her cordial on her and then she took a deep breath and fainted in peters lap and i was not that pleased but maybe she will wake up.....right?