Save Me

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By: Briana Smith Chapter 1 Brianas POV "Oh I just wanna show .you off to all of my friends make them..." goes my alarm clock. "OMB IM GONNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!!" I said as I checked my phone... It said it was Saturday!! Dang it, I woke up for nothing. Everybody knows, once you wake me up, I can't go back to sleep. "If I'm already up, I might as well go to dance," I sighed as I got dressed. I walked over to the studio, and I forgot to look both ways before crossed the street. I looked behind my and a car was about to kill me. Keelys POV "Is this for real? Briana watch out!!!" I yelled as loud as I could. Tears were streaming down my cheeks as I was looking down at her terrified face from the balcony in front of the dance studio. Right before my eyes I saw the car run over her. "Briana!!!" I screamed in horror. Immediately I ran into the studio to go get help. My mom came out and called her mom then 911. Briana's mom picked her up and ran to the ambulance. Chapter 2 Mom POV "Briana? Can you hear me?" I asked her.... She was just laying there, lifeless. "What is wrong with her? She won't answer me! Will she be okay? Where is the car that hit her?" I yelled. "She is probably in shock. She may go into a deep coma if we don't take her to the hospital." The assistant said. "Well get her to the hospital then!!" I snapped, regretting how rude I was. I looked over my shoulder and saw Keely crying in her mom's arms. "Thank you so much for calling 911 and I. I'm sure Briana will appreciate it." I told Keely and her mom. I got in to my car and followed the ambulance to the hospital. Kaylees POV "Mom! Keely just texted me- Briana got hit by a car!" I said as I started bawling. My mom drove me to the hospital. When we got there I saw Keely running inside. "Keely," I called after her. She ran to me and hugged me. We both ran upstairs to the examining room and saw Hannah and Camden in the car, pulling into the parking lot. "OMB I hope Briana is okay. I don't know what I would do without her." I thought. Hannah's POV I am so upset for Briana. I hope nothing bad has happened. I said a quick prayer as I walked in with Camden. We ran up the stairs as fast as we could. When we got in I looked at Briana. I started crying at the sight that my best friend was laying there, probably never to be the same. Camden's POV My clarinet buddy... I just can't believe it. It was so fast- My heart is racing. As soon as I got the text from Kaylee, I called Hannah and she came as fast as she could. Tears started forming in my eyes. Kaylee, Hannah, Keely, and I hugged each other, trying to stay strong. I don't want Briana to be in this situation. Chapter 3 Courtney's POV I was at looking Instagram and I saw that Briana was at the hospital! My dad drove me to the hospital and I saw that some of her other friends were there. I ran upstairs and saw Briana laying on the hospital bed with a bunch of IVs in her arm. Her heart was beating really fast- I bet she's in shock. "What exactly happened" I asked her dad. "Well, I guess she was crossing the street and some car came speeding" her dad replied. I can't believe someone would do that. Brianas POV I couldn't hear anything but echoes and I saw blurry figures. All of the sudden, everything went black. Where am I? What happened? I was still in my jazz shorts, a tank top, and had my hair in a high pony tail. I looked around and saw nothing what so ever. "Hello? Anybody here?" I yelled. I turned around and saw a figure walking towards me.... "Who are you? Someone help me!" I screamed. It looked like she had been possessed. As she was getting closer, I was running away. I ran and ran, but it seemed like this place was never ending. I looked behind me and I saw her, reaching out to me. Keelys POV I just can't even breath right now- Brianas heart isn't beating- she's not alive. I am in shock. I watched the nurse run down the hall to get the doctor. Chapter 4 Kaylees POV Is this for real? Everything happened so fast. I couldn't help myself- I ran to the bathroom and cried. I probably cried for about an hour before Hannah came in. We both hugged and cried. When we stopped crying, we looked at pictures of all of us. Oh, such happy times. "Maybe Briana will be okay." Hannah said. "Yeah maybe." I replied. I mean seriously, what would you say? Hannah and I both said prayers for Briana. "Kaylee, I think it's time to go. We can come back tomorrow first thing in the morning and see her." My mom said "Okay, Hannah, do you want us to bring you home?" I asked "Sure" she replied. We got in the car and drove away. Camden's POV Where the HAIL did this come from? Briana didn't even deserve it! She was always so sweet to everyone, even though they may have been mean to her. I was pacing around the room thinking about all that had happened in 4 hours. I wish I could talk to her again. I remember how she would do her weird dances in the band room about Mother Nature and Father Sky. She didn't even realize how thankful I was to have her as my friend. Tears came out of my eyes thinking about the thought that I would never see her again. "Your insecure, don't know what for. Your turning heads when you walk through the door don't need make-" my phone rang. "Hello?" "Hey sweetie, I'm in the parking lot, come outside and meet me."Okay" "Bye Mr. and Mrs. Smith! You will be in my prayers!" I said as I walked out. Courtney's POV I am just amazed. How could this happen. I know that I'm a year older than her, but seriously, she was a good person. I love her like she was my younger sister. We had so many memories. I can't believe the fiasco I'm in. "I better be getting home. I hope everything turns out okay" I said as I left. Keelys POV "Goodbye Mr. and Mrs. Smith, I will be here tomorrow." I said as I walked out. Moms POV I was sitting on the chair next to my own daughter who isn't alive. I was holding her hand, trying to stay strong but I just couldn't. I started crying and crying. I stayed next to her all night. Chapter 5 Brianas POV That figure reached out and touched my hand. She held it up like she had just won the Olympics and that was the trophy. "What....Who are you" I asked "I am...." The figure said. "You are..." I replied. "I'm have been waiting for you to come. You are now trapped in this world. Nobody can save you. You will never see the light of day again. Your body is dead, and now you will truly become dead." The figure said "What? Are you serious? I don't even know where I am! What did I do to you?" I asked the figure "You will be trapped here, nothing will change. I have got you under my spell now." The figure said; then vanished. Tears started streaming down my cheeks. I can't even think. Something is happening! Suddenly I saw the women coming at me... To kill me. Camden's POV I am literally crying myself to sleep every night since what happened with Briana. I know people say the car and Briana weren't paying attention, but what if the car ran over her on purpose? I know, that kinda sounds crazy, but still, it could be a possibility. I'll text Keely and tell her to come over and tell me everything she saw. ~1 hour later~ "So what exactly did you see when Briana got hit by that car?" I asked Keely. "Well, I remember I was on the balcony and I saw Briana crossing the street. At first it was okay, but then a car came speeding towards her out of nowhere! I figured Briana just wasn't looking and the car was going really fast. But the weird thing was, that when the ambulance came, the car had disappeared!" Keely told me. "That is so weird! Maybe the person driving didn't wanna be blamed for her injury (well right now, it's an death, not an injury)." I told her "Yeah, that's a good possibility." She replied. "Did it ever come to your mind that the person driving the car wanted to hit Briana on purpose?" I asked. "I don't think so, I mean who would do that?" Keely said. " I don't know, but who would just randomly be running over a teenager?" I asked. "Now that I think about it, it does sound kinda unrealistic." Keely admitted. "Yeah, well thanks for coming by! I'll talk to everybody at school tomorrow." I told Keely "Okay, bye!" She said. Hannah's POV I'm having a hard time believing that Briana is really gone. It seemed like it came out of no where. I'm gonna text Keely, Kaylee, Courtney, and Camden if they wanna get together to talk about it. ~all girls replied yes and now at Hannah's house~ "Okay, so I have brought everybody here to discuss what happened with Briana." I said, trying to sound very proffesional. "Listen, we all know what happened and shouldn't we let everybody have some alone time to try and not go into depression over this?" Kaylee snapped "Well, I just thought we had some things to talk about." I said, kinda offended. "Okay, I'm sorry,I was kinda rude" Kaylee said. "It's okay, but Camden and Keely said that they had stuff they needed to discuss with us." I said "Yes, we did. Okay so, don't you think it's a little weird that all of the suddenly car comes and hits Briana? I know that she didn't look both ways, but still, the car would've had enough time to slow down." Keely said "I agree with, but what I was thinking was that if the person in the car was trying to run over Briana on purpose." Camden stated. "Whoah whoah woah-what? I thought that the person just was speeding by... And that was all there was to it." Courtney said. "Yes, but when you think about it, it makes since." Camden said. "Oh okay, I believe you now that I really think about it." Courtney said. "But who would run over Briana on purpose? Nobody really dis-likes her.... I think." Kaylee said. "Well it could be someone we don't know." Keely said. "She never told me about anyone being rude to her. This just doesn't make any sense." I said. "We will go to the hospital tomorrow and see what the doctor says." Camden said. "Okay bye guys." I said as they all walked out. This is pretty weird. I can't bear to hear what the doctor has to say tomorrow. Kaylees POV My mom brought Camden, Keely, Hannah, Courtney, and I to the hospital. When we got there, Brianas mom was talking to the nurse and Briana was still lying there.... She looked so pale. "So what exactly is WRONG with her?" I asked the doctor. "It seems to be that she is in a deep coma and shows no signs of waking up any time soon." The doctor said. "Is there anything you can do to help?" Her mom asked. "Not at the moment. But usually in comas, your heart is still beating but it shows here that her heart has stopped, so she's not technically alive." The doctor said. Everybody was going into tears. "I think that we should just let her wake up when she can." The doctor said. I could tell her mom wasn't that happy, but she had to trust the doctor. Chapter 6 Brianas POV That freaky figure was coming at me!!! I dodged out of the way when she came running at me. She just left and I was all alone. I started walking around this mysterious place. Nothing was there. I don't know what I am going to do. I should try to get someone to save me. Keelys POV Considering that I was the one who witnessed everything, I would be the one who would be asked the most questions. Camden is thinking that someone purposely ran over Briana, but there is no proof. When I looked at the car when it was about to hit Briana, I couldn't see the person clearly. I could tell it was a woman though. I think she was old because her hair looked a kind of gray color. I don't know if the woman was just old and wasn't paying attention, or if she did it on purpose. Chances are, we would never see her again. Hannah's POV I was just sitting watching TV and my phone said that I got a text- from Briana Smith. A first I was like, I bet this is some joke, but when I read the message it said "Save me.... I'm trapped" I was kinda freaked out, but I realized it was just a joke. I decided I wouldn't tell the others about the text incase it was them who sent it trying to freak me out... Keelys POV I can't believe that Briana may never wake up. I'm really upset because I just got to know her this year. As I was thinking about everything that was going on, my phone went off. That's weird, it says it's a text message from Briana. I figured Hannah was trying to scare me. I opened up the message and it said "save me, I'm trapped." I really don't think Hannah would do this, because this is serious. Kaylees POV I don't know if I should go back up to the hospital if we haven't found any signs of her waking or being gone forever. She was my best friend since I was 5 and I can't bear to see her go. I started crying a little bit, but I had to stay strong. I went downstairs to go watch TV. ~30 mins later~ My phone rang. It's probably my mom telling me that I need to start homework..... But it said "Briana Smith" was calling me. At that point I was freaked out, but I answered the call. "Kaylee help me, save me!! I'm trapped!!" "What? Is this really Briana?!" I asked. "Yes! I'm trapped! Help me!!" The voice screamed. "Ummmm uhhhh" I mumbled as I hung up. I probably shouldn't have done that, but what are you supposed to do? That was weird. Camden's POV Uggg my hair is IMPOSSIBLE to brush!! Briana had long hair, so it was probably hard for her to brush too. I started to look close at my mirror and I saw something in my reflection. It was shaped like a human body, but it was walking close to me. I immediately knew who it was... Briana. She was tapping on my mirror "save me" is what she said over and over again. I screamed and ran out of the bathroom. Was that really her? Or was I going crazy? All of these thoughts were running through my mind. I decided to let it go and to go to sleep. ~The next morning~ I decided to text the other girls about what's been happening. After I texted them, they all said that they had seen or heard Briana talking to them. They also said that she said the same thing. "Save me" . I'm wondering if she is trying to tell us something. I I wonder if I should get everybody together to talk about what happened to Briana.... I probably should. Later that day everybody came over to my house. I think we would talk about everybody getting text messages from Briana because that's kind of weird. "I invited everybody over to talk about the weird text messages from Briana. Okay so raise your hand if you've gotten a weird text message or just a message in general from Briana." I said, everybody raised their hand. "Don't you think that she is trying to tell us something, or is it just me" I said. "I think she is trying to tell us something." Kaylee debated. "Yeah, but what?" Hannah asked. "We'll maybe she's trapped somewhere and wants us to save her." Keely said sarcastically. "Geez you don't have to get all rude." I snapped. "Ok, so what should we do?" Courtney asked. "I don't know. Maybe if we see or hear her again, try to ask her." I offered. "Yeah! I have another idea! Write down what exactly she says and we will meet back up to discuss it." Kaylee said. "Great idea! Ok, y'all can go home but remember to do that!" I yelled. "Okay bye!" All of the girls said at once.

-it has been half a year since Briana "died"-

Kaylee POV

It's been a long day. I'm gonna watch some TV. As I was about to change the channel, I saw something interesting on the news. The headline was "Teenage Girl's Body Missing" . As soon as I saw who it was, I started screaming. It was Briana's. Apparently her body went missing in the hospital last night.

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