Divergent Fanfiction

Meeting Four And Dauntless

Then i hit a net then I fill myself roll to the side and I see this Guy with Kinda Curly Brown/Blonde Hair and Light Brown Eyes and I think' He is Hot' and then He picks me up and puts me on my feet and He says" What's Your name?" And I say" B-B-Tris" and He yells" FIRST JUMPER TRIS!!!" and He smiles at Me. Then I walk over to a crowd of people and a lot more jump then they come to the crowd f people and I am standing by Christina in the front and the Guy says" My name is Four and a-"then Christina cuts him off and says" Like the number Four?" And he says"Exactly like the number" and she says" Why was 1,2, and 3 taken" and his expression changes and He walks over to Christina and He says" Well Christina if u don't keep your mouth shut me and u are gonna have a problem, did I make that clear" and she just shakes her head. Then he says" Ok, the New Trasphers stay with me and the others go with Eric" and He walks to our room and He says" This is we're u are staying" and this guy I think names Peter says" Boys or Girls?" And Four says" Both" and then he shows us the Bathroom and He says" Everyone get dressed and go to the Pit" and then he walks by me and hits me in my Shoulder with his.

-Four's POV-

Hi my Name is Tobias Eaton aka:Four, I am 18 and in the Faction Dauntless:The Brave. Tody w get some new Trasphers and I am there Instructor. I have had a very bad Childhood but I hope to forget about it in the Future.

-Time Clapse, when the New Trasphers get here-

I hear Eric screaming and then I see a Gray Blob hit the net. Then when the net stops moving I notice its a girl in a Gray Dress, She must've came from Abnegation. Then I go to the net and she looks at Me with Light Blue/Green Eyes and she has A Bondish/Orange Hair and I think- She's Cute- then I pick her up out of the net and put her on the ground and I say" What's your name?" And it takes her a few moments then she says" Tris" and I yell" FIRST JUMOER TRIS!!!" Then she smiles at me and I say" Welcome to Dauntless" and then she walks over to the others and then a lot more jump and when they are all done  say" My name is Four a-" then I get cut off by son girl and she says" Like the number?" And I say" Exactly like the number" then she says" Why was 1,2, and 3 taken?" Then I get mad and I walk to her and say" What's your name?"and she says" Christina" and I say" Well Christina if u dont keep your mouth shut me and u are gonna have a problem, did I make that clear" and she just shakes her head and then I say" The new Trasphers stay with me and the others go with Eric" then I lead them to there room and I say" This is we're u are staying at" Thena Guy named Peter says" Girls or Boys?"and I say" Both" then I lead them to there Bathroom and I say" Everyone get dressed and come to the Pit"Then I walk by Tris and slam my Shoulder into hers and before I leave I put a Note on Tris's Suit and it says -Put this on: ) Four- and then i walk down to the Pit and when I get down there I get some Dauntless Cake and sit Down and then one of the other Instructors come to me and says" U know that new Girl Tris?" And I say" Yes" and He says" Well she's Smoking Hot" and i start to get Jealous and then I ay" why are u telling me this" then he says" Idk" then he walks off and i think- Why am I Jelous of what he said about her...Unless I'm developing feels for Tris-