The Wolf and the Eyeless(A Creepypasta love story)

2: Derek

   'What if they found out I'm different.... They can't know, they'll hurt me' I thought to myself. I had been sitting in the room for several hours and trying to find a way out other than the metal door. So far I found noda... not a single other opening. I then started staring at the door until I heard someone jiggling the door knob. I freaked out a bit and scotched into the furthest corner from the door.
Once the door was open I saw a man that unlike the others wasn't that muscly so I figured he wasn't taking me somewhere. I relaxed a bit till he got closer and I tensed. "Hey it's ok I'm not gonna do anything." I just nodded but stayed tense. When he got next to me I finally looked at his face and saw he had a fairly handsom face with brown hair and blue eyes. "What's your name? " he asked."Lydia..." I said softly. "How old are you Lydia?" he asked while getting some pills out. "17... Well 18 tomorrow" I whispered. "I'm Derek and can you please take these pills for me?" he asked nicely. I shook my head no. "Lydia please it's your first day I really don't want to force you to take it." looking at me sympathetically. "I'm not gonna!" he sighed and started making me open my mouth, he then stuck in the pill. I almost spat it out but I figured he would just give me another so I swallowed.
When I swallowed he got up and headed for the door. "Sorry I had to force you" he said closing the door. The drugs were already making my kinda sleepy so I gave in and fell asleep.
That morning I woke up to someone in my room I freaked out a bit and looked around noticing Slenderman in the room with me, but when I blinked he was gone. I was a little uneasy from the Slenderman sighting and decided not to go back to sleep and just stay up. After what felt like days but what was probably a few hours Derek came into my room.
"Hey Lydia" he said coming towards. "Hey" I said trying to back up again not wanting another pill. Derek sighed"Lydia you gotta take the pill or I'll get in trouble." I shook my head "No I'm not crazy so I don't need to take it." I said boldly. He chuckled and said "Yeah then why are you here? " sarcasticly. I sighed and said "You wouldn't believe me but let's just say I saw something most people don't believe in." "Uh, huh anyway please just take the pill."he responded. I then took the pill and put it in my mouth under my tongue "There!" I say trying to sound mad he just said 'thank you' and started to leave.
When he was gone I took out the pill and stepped on it so it would be crushed into pieces and spread it out so you couldn't see it 'perfect' i thought to myself.
I then started to try to think of a plan up until I remembered the murderer that has been going around lately and stealing people's kidneys. I slowly start taking off my straight jacket, which I had learned to do when I thought my mom might send me to one of these asylums. When I got it off completely I made sure none was coming down the hall, and that there wasn't any cameras.
When I did I slowly used my powers to turn into my other form, my wolf form. I have to admit in this form I look pretty creepy my eyes turn from their normal green color to crimson red and I'm covered with midnight black hair. Once I changed I took a claw and made a pretty deep cut about where I think my kidney should be from biology. As soon as I made the cut, I turned back and let myself cry and scream in pain.
Soon I saw Derek and a guard with brown hair and green eyes come into the room and I smiled to myself before passing out from blood loss.
A/N:
Hey this is the improved second chapter and please commit if you like it cause I feel like I'm a bad writer and I wanna know people like my stories.
                                -DWolf out!✌