Percy Jackson is Known

Camp Half-Blood

Percy's P.O.V.

On the streets of Manhattan I saw something weird. Monsters everywhere and a bunch of mortals we're seeing them they were in complete terror. I then decided to get into action when I realized that the monsters were cornering someone. It must be a half-blood I thought as I saw the monsters move in. The girl was about to be killed so I went into action.
Izzy's P.O.V.

Weird scary monsters were cornering me into an alley. The name is Izzy Larson and my dad has left me. I have raven black hair, sea green eyes and tan skin. My mom never talked about him but I knew that he was special. I'm 10 years old and moved around a lot cause of some weird things happened in my life. Right when some guy with one eye in the middle of his head was about to attack a sword stuck out of his stomach. Then the creature disintegrated into a pile of sand. There stood a guy that looked about 17, and had the same raven black hair, sea green eyes and tan skin. He looked so much like me that he could pass as my older brother. He then hacked at the others and soon none of them were left, leaving me in shock. The mortals saw all of it.

"Run it's some creepo with a sword!" One of them yelled and all of them ran around screaming flailing their arms. The boy that saved me put a pen cap on the tip of the sword and it shrinks into a ballpoint pen which surprised me even more than the monsters. He then knelt down to me and gave me a smile.

"Hi my name is Percy Jackson what's yours?" He asked me. I was super shocked and scared that he might try and hurt me.

"I-Izzy L-Larson" I stuttered shyly. He then stood up and held a hand up. I slowly took it and stood up. When we were out of the alley he did a loud whistle and I thought that he was hailing a cab, but after like a minute of waiting which felt like hours(I'm ADHD and dyslexic) I saw a creature flying down towards us. When it came closer I saw that it was a horse with wings and it was dark blue as well. Then Percy got on held a hand out for me and I got on as well. Soon we were flying high in the air. After a few minutes we arrived at a valley that looked like a village or something.

"Izzy, welcome to Camp Half-Blood" Percy exclaimed.

I know I know I need more dialogue and more action well in the later chapters there will be action ok I promise. Trust me.