GUN SHOT

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There was a noise coming from the other side of me wait there it is again... Boom it came at me the... Gun shot! At this moment all I could her was A screaming sound going on and on and on whilst I was feeling dizzy and faint and taking my last breath hu hu hu I was panting I tried to get up but I fell

BLACK OUT

I woke up at the hospital on a very thin mattresses which made the nity rise up. I could see a young lady crying outside my room and a lady who I didn't recognise holding my hand wh who are you I asked very anxiously. "I'm Amanda don't you remember me Amanda Parkinson" she replied looking very upset. The nurse walked in whith my medicine, it had the name jerry Parkinson on it. I started to scream I shouted saying my name is jerry pin I opened my wallet to get my driving licence out to prove to them, i took out a driving licence which said dr Radcliffe then my wallet fell hundreds and hundreds of pounds fell out my wallet including 12 driving lisence whith the names jerry Parkinson, jerry pin, dr Radcliffe,mr jerry loy,jerry scadin,jerry play and lots more.

I was trying to reach for them. Everyone looked oddly at me I didn't know why there were so many I just thought I was an ordernary blouche called jerry pin.i got discharged 3 weeks later I didn't have any visitors on the last week except for this very suspicious man who kept looking at me as I moved in agony, and he kept shouting at the nurses anyway I'm out now as soon as I got to a hotel I got a letter through the hotel door it said if you want the young lady back then pay up this was written on a black old piece of paper which smelt of smoke and petrol I couldn't believe that I had to pay for a girl I don't even know, it it had the number on the back so I gave him or her a call.

Beep beep beep hello said the man

I recognised his voice he's the one who came to visit he had a macho sounding voice but it was also quite rough I asked him who's the young lady you've caught he didn't answer he just laughed I told him I didn't need threat notes after I had had just bin through a lot of stress! He hung up

BEEP

It had a figure underneath the last word it was written in a faint grey pen in scribbled hand writing I managed to make out what it said it said... £100,000,000 one million pounds I gasped I was shell shocked as people might say I was flabber gastered I was I was astonished by the fact I had to pay one million pounds for a young lady who I didn't even know!

I tried to call, downstairs to room serves but i couldn't remember the number I didn't tell the nurses that I didn't know anybody who came to visit. I just went a long with it. The hotel room I was in was big and clean it had a massive balcony which spread out above a water feature I went to sun bave on the balcony for a bit whilst listening to a very old fashioned singer which I found on my I pod I think it said elvis I'm not sure.

It was very warm and quiet the birds where tweeting and humming a song la la la la...

CRASH

Someone had smashed through the window he had small feet and had a very peculiar nose. He had a knife he flipped me over and was so close to taking my eye out but all of a sudden I remembered who I was just for a second I flung him round slit his thought flipped him over the balcony and he landed on top of the point of the water fountain it went straight through him.

I had a very strange phone call that very afternoon he said to visit him at the top of Bolton tower so I did.

There was a girl sat at the centre of the tower she was tied up on a chair I looked down from the tower and I saw Amanda running towards the tower I was confused why she was there but then I realised that the girl in the middle was the girl outside my room it was all coming together now Amanda Must of been her mum and the man who visited me must of been Harold the young lady's godfather I'm starting to remember the young girl is Amy my my DAUGHTER! I rush over to her very quick neel down next to her but then I realise Harold was behing me he puts a knife straight through me I move my hand and try to cover my swelling but I didn't have the energy I dropped...

THE END

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I went it to my dads funeral today so sad oh yeah and my names Amy. I've carried on my dads job and I'm making it up to him by following in all of his footsteps today I have a really important job it's life or death literally I need to go deliver some stolen goods to the son of the man my dad killed I even have to use my dads driving licenses now and dress as a boy because there to eleagle to make anymore.

I set the satnav to we're I wanted to go and started driving my Car, I try to find a short cut because of the time which I really shouldn't of done.

Boom

A black mini came straight into the back of me he was searching for something the gun it was very strange that he didnt want the stolen goods and he just wanted a gun but then i remembered what happened to my dad at the start. He asked me my name so I said dr Radcliffe. He said your jerrys daughter aren't you... I ransomed my car and drove as fast as I could there was a split second were I didn't think of anything. I saw that the mini was following me and then wait he's fallen of the cliff yes I get out my car to look wait I her on noise on the other side of me then the other

BOOM GUNSHOT.

I woke up on a thin mattress which made the nity rise up I saw this lady next to me holding my hand she said. She was called Amanda she then got out a gun and said GUNSHOT I was terrified she placed it to my head and I quickly buzzed for the nurses to late... Boom I was dead

Amanda took her mask of and ran away it was actually Harold I was watching everything that happened I went to Amy's funeral covered so no one knew who I was -jerry parkinson

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