Star Wars:The rise of the Empire Part 1

Chapter 2: the search for the Jedi

It was a dark day for Luke, as he flew away from Hoth he was thinking about his family with the lasers in their bodies. "R2, do you miss him, he was a great guy with all his amazing adventures about the rebellion, against the empire." Luke said.  Luke found the Planet that Luke Sr was born on, Tatooine the home of the sand people. (ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!) the sand people were screaming and shouting at the  starfighter while it flew past. Luke parked his starfighter in an un-guarded parking area just outside the town.

Luke put on his hooded robes to blend in. The Stormtroopers are still on the lookout for Luke ever since he escaped the raid of Hoth. He walked into the bar unseen. (Music playing.) He walked up to a dodgy looking man in a hood with a lightsaber in his holster. "Sir, do you know where I can find the Jedi secret order?"Luke asked. "No now piss off." He replied. "Sir, allow me to repeat that,  do you know where to find the Jedi secret order." Luke repeated. "I said PISS OFF!!!" He shouted. 'Crash!' 'Bang!' 'Bang!' 'Whack' 'clack' 'Bang!'Luke shot the Dodgy man with his Blaster. "We heard a noise what's happening?" The Stormtrooper asked. (Gasp) "It's him!"The man shouted.'Bang!' 'Bang!' Luke ran out the back entrance and hid in a Garbage bin. "He went this way." The Stormtrooper said. "Hey you I heard you were looking for the Jedi secret order."The hooded man said. "Yeah what's it to you?" Luke asked. "Follow I know the path."The man told.

The Solar system,  outside  planet Hoth...

There's something being constructed outside Hoth something more Dangerous than the death star. An Entire fleet of Larger Death stars than the Death star mark 2 and The mother star destroyer with more than a thousand normal star destroyers. What is Vader up to?

The Bridge, Mother star destroyer...

"These Death Stars are taking to long we've been making the fleet for almost 50 years, Malgus How long till the fleet is created!" Vader shouted. "A few more hours sir." Malgus replied. "Good, when we are done set coarse for Planet Bespin." Vader ordered.

Tatooine dessert, 5 hours later...

"C'mon little Skywalker we have a long distance to walk."Said the stranger. "Oh come on can't I have a break or something that doesn't include walking?" Luke asked. "... No we only have a few hours left just hang in there or drink some water."The stranger said.   

A few hours later...            

"Are we nearly there?" Luke asked. "As a matter of fact we are." The stranger said. "Whoa!"Luke shouted. "you're training begins now."The stranger said."Are you ready."The stranger said.