My review on Starkit's Prophecy

HALP ME

  [ Oh god..here we go.. Okay^^ the video is fricken hilarious and you HAVE to watch it]

ALLIANCES
ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz

btw its set afte rsunset so

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom
[ Are we not going to mention probably his most important feature other than his power.....?]

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-ca
[ CHICA ]

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace
[ Wait...did you not see the part where she didn't want a warrior name? OR and apprentice name?]

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom
[ Foxleap...Foxleap was the word you were looking for...]

IceFire-white she cat
[ Its okay...]

ToadRibbit-black-and-white tom
[ TOADSTEP?! WHAT HAVE THEY DONE TO YOU?!?!]

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat
[ wat ]

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat
[ she..no..I can't..I don't even...]

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black
stipes
[ HES A DUDE ]

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark
stripe along her spine
[ Blossomwind....BLOSSOMWIND just let that sink in...]

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace
[ Foxdaisypaw...so majestic...]

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes

The last 2 r starKits siters
[ Her siters? Ssssssssiters? What do they do...Site her?]