Hey guys Chelsrose here look I just wanted to say this isn't maybe what you were expecting to see and probably would like another chapter. But the best way I can continue to make this story progress and even better is to get feedback from you guys and suggestions too. Cause I'm really curious to see how the story is heading. Like do you guys enjoy it or is there anything I can improve on? Or do you guys like the riddles I leave after each chapter or do you guys have something else in mind? I would just really like to hear what you guys think cause I want to make this story enjoyable for you guys to read because I like writing so much(^~^). So to end off remember many mistakes in life can equal great success in the end no matter what you may want to accomplish, and also please be kind with constructive criticism. And don't worry a new chapter will update soon I think it will be a real juicy one. Take care everyone Chelsrose signing off(/^▽^)/.