Creator: MidnightSheW0lf
My ranking: 3/10 (I'm sorry!)
Description:
Name: holly lenger
Cp name: Adder
Age: 19
Height: 5"9
Weight: 52kg
Species: (wasn't mentioned but I'm guessing she's a humanoid)
Appearance: slim, pale skin, two facial scars one that goes across her left eye and curves upwards to her forehead the other goes from the corner of her right eye across her cheek and across her lips. Snake like tongue and sharp teeth. Black jacket with a light purple tank top underneath and grey ripped camp jeans with black combat boots.
Weapon: Acid/poison using her claws, there clip on ones that are very sharp, search up catwoman claws for good reference, and hand to hand combat l.e strangulation and neck snapping (that is what you meant right? Before it said necks napping and I'm not sure if that's even a thing)
Disorders: cat eye syndrome and amber eyes.
Review: (please don't hate me cuz this is HONESTT!! And it's my opinion!!) the first thing I need to point out is amber eye isn't a disorder or syndrome of any sort, It can actually be a normal eye colour. The next thing I've got to point out is the fact that your oc is WAY to powerful! Most pastas only have one weapon and are still really powerful (I mean look at eyeless jack all he had us a scalpel and he's REALLY powerful), then your oc has all of theses different weapons and abilities. The last thing I have to complain about is that her creepypasta names Adder, does that mean something in a different language? Is it just a random name? This confused me a lot, cp names should match their personality, appearance and the way they kill, this name didn't match any of those things.
I know I completely forgot to ask this, but does she have a backstory? If she died can it explain were the scars and teeth came from? And where did she get the acid from to kill her victims? This was all confusing. I'm sorry for being harsh but it's my honest opinion.
(Please don't hate me!! I was a little harsh in this one, I understand how bad it feels to get a low score so I understand if your mad. Just don't hate me forever!!!)
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