Hey sorry for the long wait I started school today yaay (sarcastic) so i might not update for two weeks or something or I might just update in weekends can u guys plz update I really need u guys to update I want u guys opinions on my story I really do so can u plzz just do that thx now here is the story
BEASTBOY POV
I picked up Raven and put her down gently in the back seat and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek and ran in the car her brother Mike got in the drivers seat u really he said yea I said in a shaky voice we brove to the hospital it only took us about 20 mins to get there I picked up Raven and carried her inside HELP HELP SOME ONE HELP HER B I yelled 3 docters came running in and they put Raven on the bed and wheeled her away I started to run with them but a nurse held me back sir, SIR! U need to calm down u can't go in their But..But..I love her I need to go in their she needs me I'm not leaving her by herself she can't leave me I need her plzz. sir look I know what's its like to see your loved one hurt I've been their in the end he end up being fine and we been together for 2 years now just chill sir we need u to chill out I sigh and she let go of me we'll do everything we can just sit and wait and u can go to our gift shop if u like u know to pass the time maybe even buy her a gift I'm sure she would love it she said before going to a room hey um I'm going to be back with some food k her brother said yea I said in a low raspy voice he then left I then sigh and I decided to take the nurse advice and buy her a gift so I went to the the gift shop I tried looking for a gift i was about to just give up and get her some black purple and blue flowers but something caught my eye this would be perfect I said
Heyyyy pups sorry it was short I told u guys I needed more ideas I know what the present is I just decided to stop here idk y but I really need u guys ideas I'm really getting upset that no1 is commenting on my story and giving me ideas I might even stop the story because I'm not getting comments I would still like to thank u guys for reading my book I'm glad that 48 peeeps read my book even tho I only went 8 more up I'm glad that people reading it so yea bye
-violet12300110✌