Haircut (A Bts/Got7 Fanficfiction)

Summer Job!

Ring ring ring.

There goes my alarm, but it doesn't matter because I was up before it.
It's was my first day at my new job and there is no chance that I, Sun Hyo Ri is going to be late.
I did my makeup and got dressed in a floral skater skirt, a red tank top with a leather jacket, and some classic black vans. I was ready in no time, but the clock didn't say that.
I started freaking out, "THERE IS NOOOOO WAY THAT IM ALREADY 10 MINUTES LATE" .
"Hyo Ri please stop yelling, I don't want the neighbors to call the cops again." said my mother.
"Mom I'm late can you please drive me, there is no way I can ride the bus". I sat in front of her making my puppy dog eyes, while she flipped through channels.
"Sorry hun I can't I'm busy," she wasn't even looking at me. "Just take my car and it will be our little secret". She said. It's not that I can't drive, I'm 20 but my dad doesn't trust me with the car
"okay mom I be back in 2 hours."
She waved me off still looking at the tv.
Aigoo, the lady.
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Okay I'm here, but that doesn't make up me being late. "Sun Hyo Ri" I heard a guy with a very deep voice call my name.
"Annyeonghaseyo sir, nice to mee..." I started.
"Your 15 min late, there's no time to waste, go show them what you got". He said then winked at me. How does he know my name.
"Annyeonghaseyo, je ileum-eun Sun Hyo Ri ibnida. (Hello my name is Sun Hyo Ri) I'm sorry for being late please take care of me. Thank you." I bowed not yet to see any faces but I heard girls whispering. "Ew who is she" "haha a newbie" "they'll never go for someone like her"
I tried to ignore them, but The nerves are getting to me. I felt tears well up in my eyes. So far it's not a great experience. I should just quit. "I hope you're all being nice to one another." All the girls in the room gasped.
"Yeah, but cat fights are pretty cool,"
"Not really,"
Their conversation kept going on and on. I spun around quickly. "B-b-b..." I tried to say something else, but all that I can say is "B-b-b..."
"BTS!" A random girl shouted, the whole room turned into a high pitched frenzy.

Alright everyone that was the first chapter. What do you think? Sorry if it kinda suck or really suck. It's my first story, but please don't be afraid to let me know what you thought about it. Feedback would be really helpful to take into consideration when I'm writing the next chapter. Question: who's your bias in BTS?
Answer: V :)
Okay until we meet again.