MAKE IT RIGHT

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Kazhinja divasathe kaaryangal orkkumbol Aravin enthennillaatha santhosham aayirunnu. Hobikkum angane thanne aayirunnu. Aadhyam Kookie yumaayi kashapisha undaakkiyenkilum pinneedulla divasam nannaayi thanne aan poyathenn avalkk thonni. Ammaye nashtappetta kuttiyaanenkilum ath ariyaathirikkaan ethratholam Aarav kashtappedunnundenna karyam aalochikkumbol avalkk oru respect thonni Aaravinod.

Swantham veettile shwaasam muttikunna anthareekshathil ninnum vittunilkkunna ee divasangal avalkk nalkiya santhosham cheruthallayirunnu.

Hobiyum chimiyum Gym ilekk povaan ready aavukayaayirunnu..

​"Hobi... Pettann onnu ready aaku, Samayam oorpadayi," muriyilekk ethinokkikkond Chimy paranju.

​"Itha varunnu Chimy..."

​Hobi vegam oru track pantsum loose aaya oru t-shirtum eduthanninju. Dressinte kayyiloode nokkumbol kayythandayile aa chuvanna paadukal veendum thelinjunilkkunnath kandu.
Aval ath kaanatha reethiyil t-shirtinte kai alpam thaazhthiyittu.

​Randuperum koodi gym complexilekk caril poyi. Valiya oru multi-story buildinginte naalaam nilayilayirunnu gym. Buildinginte entrance-il ethiyappolekkum Hobikk valiya oru ksheenam thonniyirunnu. Divasangalayi ullil kidakkunna aa aswasathayum neriya thalarchayum veendum thalapokkunnu.

​"Namukku step kayari pokam Hobi, workout-inu munne nalla oru warm-up aakum," Chimy liftin aduthakk pokathe staircase-ilekk nadannukond paranju.

​"Ayyyo Chimy... Enikk aake oru thalarcha pole. Nee nadanno, njan liftil varam," Hobi yaachanayode paranju.

​"Madathinu step kayaraan vayye😁... Sheri sheri, njan odi mukaliletham, nee vegam vaa," Chimy chirichukond steps kayeri mukalilekk odi.

​Hobi pathiye nadannu liftinte aduthakk chennu. Athesamayam, buildinginte marubhaagathu ninnum avidakk nadannu varukayayirunna Annie aval liftilekk kayerunnath kandu. Kim Corporations-ile Aaravinte P.A. aaya Annie-kk, thale divasam Aaravinum makalkkumoppam ice cream parlour-il vech Hobiye kandathu muthal ullil kaddutha asooyayum deshyavumundayirunnu. Aaravine swanthamakkan shramikkunna thante vazhiyile thadassamayi aanu aval Hobiye kandath.

​Hobi liftil kayeri door adanjathum, aarum shradhikkunnilla enn urappu varuthi Annie main switch panelinte aduthekk nadannu. Yathoru dayayumillathe liftinte power supply switch aval off cheythu.

​"Dhim...!"
​Oru valiya shabdathode lift moonnaam nilaykkum naalaam nilaykkum idayil vech pettenn nilachu. Akathe velicham poornamayum ananju.

​Aprethekshithamayi ellam iruttilayappol Hobiyude nenjonn pidanju. Aval paribhramathode liftinte emergency buttonilum doorilum thatti nokki. Oru prathikrenavumilla. Cheruppam muthale idungiyathum irundathumaaya sthalangalodulla kadutha bhayam (Claustrophobia) Hobiyude ullilekk irachukayeri.

​Athinupuram, ullil pukayunna avalude asugham koodi chernnappol shwaasamedukkan aval vallathe budhimutti.

​"Aarengilum undo... Lift stuck aayi... Enikk shwaasam muttunnu..." Aval kayyilulla shakthiyathrayum eduth dooril thatti vilichu. Phone aanenkil Chimyude bagilum.

​Seconds-ukal nimishangalayi maariyappol avalude shareeram viyarthu kulichu. Cold sweat nettiyoode ozhugiyirangi. Alveoli-yelekk oxygen ethatha pole, nenjil valiya oru bhaaram amarnnathayi avalkk thonni. Vaayuvinayi kithachukond aval liftinte bhithiyoode thaazhekk oornnirunnu. Oduvil, thalachorilekkulla oxygen pravaham kuranj aval unconscious aayi veenu.

​Mukalil gyminte entrance-il kaathuninna Chimy samayam 10 minutes kazhinjittum Hobiye kaanathe paribhramichu.

​"Ivali eth evide poyi? Oru liftil varan ithra samayamo?"

​Chimy vegam thaazhekk odi irangi. Liftinte button amarthiyittum lift anangunnilla enn kandathode avalkk apakadam manathu. Aval thaazhe security roomilekk odichennu.

​"Chetta... Lift work cheyunnilla! Athil ente friend undayirunnu!" Chimy karachilinte vakkilethi paranju.

​"Ayyyo... Ath power trip aayathakum madam, njan onnu nokkatte," security vegam panel roomilekk odi nokki switch on cheythu.

​Main power vannathode lift thaazhekk ethi door thurannu.

​Akathe kaazhcha kand Chimyude kaalkeazhile mann olichupoyi!
​Unconscious aayi, viyarthu kulichu nilathu kidakkunna Hobi.

​"Hobi...! Kannu thurakk Hobi...!" Chimy nilavilichukond avalkk aduthekk odiyirunnu. Avalude kayyukal thanuthu maravichittundayirunnu. Vasthrathinte kayyiloode purathekk thelinjuninna shareeratile aa kadum chuvappu paadukal Chimyude shradhayil pettengilum, ath chinthikkanulla avasthayilayirunnilla aval.

​Securityude yum mattullavarudeyum sahaayathode Hobiye udan thanne aduthulla Multi-specialty hospital-ile Casualty-il etichu.

​Hospital ICU-vin purathu nenjidippode Chimy kaathuninnu. Doctor purathekk vannathum aval odichennu.

​"Doctor... Avalkk enganeyund? Conscious aayo?"

​"Vishamikkenda, severe panic attack, oppam hyperventilation kaaranam pettenn bodham maranjathanu. Ippol nammal oxygen support koduthittund. Biomarkers stable aakunund," Doctor gauravathode paranju.

​Thudarnnu Doctor Chimye sookshmamayi nokki.
"Oru kaaryam chodikkatte... Patient nilavil enthengilum Chronic disease-ino mattu asughangalkko long-term medications edukunnundo?"

​"Medication-o? Enikkariyilla Doctor... Avalkk cheriya skin allergy undenn paranjirunnu. Athinu marunn kazhikunnundenn thonnunnu," Chimy samshayathode paranju.

​"Nokkoo... Allergy-ude mathram lakshanangalalla ith. Haemoglobin count valare low aanu. Oppam avayavangalil kaanunna ee Erythema/Rashes, ith saadhaaraneyaya oru skin allergy-alla. Proper aayi diagnose cheyyanam. Aval kazhikunna marunnukalude prescription-o recent medical reports-o undengil udan ethikkan parayoo," Doctor nirdheshichu.

​Chimy udan thanne Jinaye phone-il vilichu kaaryangalokke paranju.

​"Jina chechi... Hobi hospital-ilaanu. Pedikkan onnumilla, pakshe Doctorkk avalude medical reports-um ippolatha marunnukalum venamenn parayunnu. Chechi vegam athonn eduth konduvarumo?"

​Ketta paade Jina kayyil kitta Hobiyude prescriptionukalum file-ukalumaayi hospital-ilekk odiyethi. Avalude kayyukal viraykkunnundayirunnu.

​Jina file-ukal Doctorkk kaimaari. Doctor oro page-um sookshmamayi parishodhichu. Page-ukal marichu nokkumthorum Doctorude mukhathe gauravam koodivannu.

​"Nokku..." Doctor file adachuvechukond avare randu pereyum nokki. "Ee reports vech nokkumbol ithorru simple allergy alla. Nalkiyirikkunna medications suppressants mathramaanu. Rogathinte yathartha kaaranam athil vyakthamalla. Haematological aayi allengil Auto immune level-il entho valiya thakaraarukal kaanikkunund."

​"Doctor... Enthaa ningal parayunnath? Avalkk allergy-aanenna njangal karuthiyath..." Jinayude shabdam idari.

​"Athalla. Accurate aayi kaaryangal ariyanamengil kooduthal detailed test-ukal venam. Kuranjath oru divasamengilum patient-ne admit cheyyendivarum. Adiyanthiramayi Biopsy-kkayi (Tissue Biopsy) avalude body-il ninnulla tissue sample eduth pathology labilekk ayakkanam. Aa report vannale yathartha chithram vyakthamaagoo," Doctor tharappichu paranju.

​Tissue Biopsy enna vaakku kettathum Jinayudeyum Chimyudeyum ulliloode oru kolliyan minnippaanju. Entho valiya oru apakadam thangale kaathirikkunnundenna thiricharivil randu perum thakarnnu nilkkukayayirunnu...