Chapter 1 -Beginning-

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Harry: it's cold tonight

Niall: no, it feels good.. It was a good day but what happened a while ago was a bit.. weird!

Harry: what? What happened, and when?

Niall: oh, i forgot, you weren't there

Harry: then, tell me

Niall: it's not so important!

Harry: just say

Niall: fine, Louis saw something weird in the corridor at night before we just leave

Harry: what did he see?

Niall: he was walking out of the building but he heard a strange noise, he didn't care but the noise repeated itself louder.. it took his attention so he went around to see what's going on but he found nothing, and suddenly!...Nothing.

Harry: What?! Niall, don't be silly!

Niall: Kidding! Anyways.. He felt something behind him but he found nothing, it made him feel a bit scared but he didn't care anyway, he headed to the exit of the building but when he turned to walk out of the building he saw something like a black shadow or something similar sprinted from in front of him, he felt scared and ran but something or someone pushed him from behind so he fell on the ground, he was about to scream cause no one was in that floor expect him he ran out of the whole building and i was waiting him there. He told me what happened and he had a sweaty forehead and heavy breath but when he calmed he left to his room and i came here to meet you.

Harry: woah! I think he hated dorms even more! he's gonna tell all of that tomorrow -He said, giggling 

Niall: yeah

Harry: okay, i think we should go now. see you tomorrow -He said and waved for him

Niall: fine, bye

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Niall , Louis , Harry , Liam , and Zayn had been close friends for more than five years and still, but will this friendship protect or even help them?

and would what happened with Louis happen with him again or with any of them? and what was that shadow?

To be continued..

Well, this is 'who's next?' in its English version. And yeah, I'm translating my own story! xD
What do you think of my writing style? Should i change something?

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Tota :D

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