Critics go down

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The woman stood at the door wearing a long duster her eyes grey hair jet black.

The woman knocks at the door after a few minutes the door opens.

Mr.goody she asked the ugly scar faced man he nods yes in reply.

The woman pulls out a shot gun out from under her duster coat.

She puts the gun to the his head pulls the trigger.

Bang his brain matter and blood flys every witch way and his lifeless body drops to the ground.

She heads back to the car tosses her gun in the back seat.

She pulls paper from the glove department she writes a check next to the name mr.goody.

At the very top of the page it says rude critics that bad mouthed my book.

The woman wipes her face clean with a rag getting all the blood and brain matter off then turns the black car on.

The woman drives for a while then pulls in to a parking lot she heads inside the bulding.

The woman walks up to the cuntior and asks can I get a number ten.

The END

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⏰ Last updated: May 05, 2013 ⏰

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