Waiting fur him to notice me (sorry for the pun) boyxboy

First day (#1)

Hi everyone, this is my first ever fanfiction, so please tell me anything you feel about the story, I would also like to point out a few authors who I have been inspired by!
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Steph
Fox
Tan, but a bit reddish fur
Gay
Male
Brown eyes
Easy-going
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Steph POV
Beep beep beep beep
Ugggggh, 6:30, I'm not a morning person, but still I got up out of my bed and into the shower. I let the water fall on me for a while before actually washing, and soon I am getting dressed and almost ready to go.
I live in a apartment by myself as my parents travel a lot for their jobs, so they moved me here, to California, because my parents just thought that the high school here was good for me, so we own a flat and they send me money every week for food, which means that I have the house to myself the whole time.
[time skip forward to bus stop]
As it is the first year for everyone at this high school in my grade, people don't know each other, so as I get on the bus I take a seat by myself, as I'm not the most social person.
However, after a few stops, another fox came onboard and sat down next to me. His fur was more tan than mine, and he had green eyes, and he seemed to be a bit like me as in the fact that he wasn't the most social creature, but only came to me as I was the only other fox on the bus. I could see his abs and muscle through his shirt, and then i looked up to find that he was looking at me, so I blushed and looked away. Damn this guys cute, (italics = thoughts) wait, what, I do not want to be seen as gay the first day, I know a few people I this bus, and they will beat the f*ck out of me if they find out.
I looked up to see that the other fox was blushing, and that made him even more cute, woah Steph he's way out of your league I wasn't out of shape, yet I didn't really have obvious muscle, and I still had a bit of fat on me.
"So what's your name?" I said trying to change the focus
"James" he said, " and yours?"
"Steph" and we continued the small talk for a longer while of the ride before getting to school.

James' POV
Wow this guy is cute, but usually I go for studs, but this guy is just so cute in his own way. I knew I was gay since a few years ago, when I first developed a crush on a hit fox, though I have never had the courage to ask someone out, and dex seemed so calming, and I felt so good around him, though I am looking for a relationship purely filled by lust, not romantic yet.
[time skip, high school]
Steph pov
I walked into my first lesson, and sadly James wasn't there, though I got placed next to someone who caught my eye right from the start, this wolf with greyish-blueish fur, and he was one of the hottest people I had ever seen, and I vowed to get him in my bed soon, calm down dexter, you don't even know his name yet, and keep things slow, remember? So before the teacher started roll call, I tried to talk to him,
St [steph] - hi, my name's dexter, what's yours?
S[sky] - skylar, call me sky though
Sky huh, well with that cloud Grau fur of yours, your welcome to make a storm in my bed! Woah Steph, calm down.
Luckily, I managed to keep my cool, and we chatted a bit, and it seemed like we were going to be friends. We had lots of classes together, so after lunch, when he said he was going to go to the gym, I said I was as well, I was definitely not letting a chance to see how fit sky was go down the drain.
In the changing room, I was lucky since my locker was right next to his, so when he took his shirt off, I had front row seats, and his abs were the most amazing thing I had ever seen, now I was too horny to do anything, luckily as the school had a scheduling error, we had the day off after break. After working out with sky for a bit, wow I'm keeping my cool, I havens blushed at all and I'm like the most Horney thing on earth, I found a note in my locker.

Meet me at the Starbucks after lunch recess
-James

So after lunch break, he met James at the Starbucks and almost right after we sat down James said
J[james] - so I have a confession to make....
This can't be happening,
J - I'm gay and I want to continue this meeting with a bit more 'conversation' somewhere more private, how bout it's?
YES
St- definitely, I have my apartment to myself, but first
I stared to stand up and go to the exit, and lead James behind the cafe
J - *playfully growls at me*
I was to horny to wait another minute, so i locked lips with James and held it for a long time, our tongues fighting for dominance.

Though I have to admit I imagined James was sky the whole time.
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Ps sorry if I'm talking American English than English English, I'm native to both countries