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        Chapter 1

You would think that first days, especially at a new school, are stupid, no fun, and super annoying days. But this day, man was this day different than all the rest. I move around a lot since my dad is in the military, but this was the BEST. It was all because of this girl. I walked into first hour n saw.. her! The most beautiful human I’ve ever seen in my life. Was she even human?! Damn I thought she was an angel. Her name is Kristen, she’s about 15 years old and like 5feet tall and Hispanic. She had beautiful long, luscious blonde-brown curly hair, great lips, and beautiful dark brown eyes. She was wearing a white shirt that had a gold buckle and black belt a little above her belly button, a black skirt that stopped about an inch above her knees, and some black flats with a gold buckle type thing that matched perfectly with her belt. She was stunningly gorgeous. I couldn’t keep my eyes off of her (not that I even wanted to anyways). She seemed to be every guys dream girl.

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    After school I met up with my friend Miguel, we met when I moved here, in the beginning of summer and we’ve been friends ever since then. I told Miguel about Kristen n he’s seen her before, they went to school together since like kindergarten lucky bastard I thought.

“Damn dude, imagine if you could tap ‘dat!”

I laughed, “C’mon bro, I’m not thinkin’ of her in that way, I mean I really like her,” I sighed.

“So you’re tellin’ me you haven’t looked at that perfect ass of hers?”

“Hell naw dude. Trust me, I’ve seen it. But what I’m tellin’ you is, I really like her.”

“Wow. Who knew you’d be the kind to fall in love with someone you jus met. Aweeeeeeeeeeeeee.” He winked at me, what a weirdo.

“Shut up, Miguel!” I said hitting him in the arm, hard.

He rubbed his arm, “Wow. Aye, dude, look.” He pointed to the back of the football field where the woods is at.

“That’s weird, Kristen’s goin’ into the woods.”

“No shit Sherlock.”

“Shut up nigga. What you think she’s funna do?”

“Maybe she got a tree house there or somethin…” he says laughing

“A sexy ass 15 year old havin a tree house? Oh yeah. Um I think not. Ahaha.”

“Let’s go check it out then,” he says starting to walk towards the woods.

“What the hell do you think you’re doin’?!” I say pulling him back. He pulls his arm back and starts to walk again but faster, “I think I’m gonna go check it out!”

“Whatever. Hold on bro, I’m comin’”

“Ewwwwwwww you’re cumin’? Man, thas nasty.”

“Damn nigga! You’re fuckin nasty. I didn’t mean it that way,” I say pushing him.

“C’mon bro, hurry up,” he says starting to run.

By now we’re in the woods, following this trail full of soda cans, sun tan bottles, and papers all over the ground. This place was d dumb, probably being behind a school full of crazy high schoolers made it like this.

“Man, this place is a dump!” Miguel says

“I know, but shit the hell up. You want her to hear us?!”

“Naw, sorry I’ll shut up now.”

Wow. I thought I was in love… until I saw the real her…