Camp A-Results

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It’s here what we have all been waiting on. I am sorry for the long wait and we will try not to let it happen again.

Okay so I guess you want to know who won. Well I won't tell you just yet haha. Anyway I want to thank the special judge for everything she did it would not have been possible without her. Oh yea I almost forgot you don’t know who she is. Well you all might know her from Watty’s next rising star…Drum Roll Please…

TakenByHeart

Now that you all know that, I don’t want any rude or hateful things said about her or to her. If you have any concerns please talk to your judge or Nicole. Thank you!

So I am handing this over to Evie as of now.

Oh my goodness :P I read Sam's and Nicole's stories and I have got to say they were both REALLY good. Each one seemed to pull me in. there were lots of mistakes BUT it's only camp A so I can't blame anyone for that :P it can only get better :)

On Sam's story I loved how it was easy to get in to  and I completely didn't see it coming when Rose woke up at the end. I was reading it and got so into it I was sort of cheering for Rose... and was sad about the baby thing :( Plus that "People Lick Too" THAT STORY SCARES THE CRAP OUTTA ME!! I've heard it so many times and I HATE it xDD there's another version of it that I hate even more...

Anyways now on to Nicole's. I freakin loved this one BUT it also creeped me out because I JUST had a dream EXACTLY like it. Well sort of... I ran away and got kidnapped but then got saved. So THAT creeped me out xDD anyways, I really did like this one, but towards the ending kind of mixed me up a little. I don't know if I over read it or not. but when he is talking to rose in the bed (Is there a theme with the name rose or is this a coincidence? :P) was that a year later? it never really told me that... again, unless I over read it then please forgive me for saying it.

All-in-all I would have to go with Sam's story. I felt like the pace of how the story was told was a good pace and I could easily follow along with it. 

I hope this helps :)

-Evie

Nicole's (Iloveyoubay) team please read this: I am proud of you. In my mind you are winners. You all are amazing but we had great competition. We will come back stronger than ever. Do not give up let this be lesson, take nothing for granted and take what you have learned so far with you.

-Nicole

Camp B will be up soon but Sam’s team will not be writing they will be doing something else which you will find out soon enough. Until next time.

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