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Later that night Officer Delatoso comes to my house and explains Andrew didn’t do it and the murderer was still at large. That night I decided to use the clues and find the murderer. One more time I take a nice trip to the warehouse. As I approached the house I saw someone standing where Michaela died. It was Steven Andrew’s brother. Then I heard a loud BAM and hid behind a bush.
Steven lay lifeless on the ground and person in a devil mask approached his body stared for a moment and then left. I ran over to steven put him on my skateboard and brought him home. I bust through the door and yell “Steven was killed by the murderer.” I scan their faces and see a bunch of tears rolling down his mothers, his dad had a small tear come down and Andrews had no emotion. I came home and Quinn attacked me at the door “Quinn stop I saw a boy die tonight” I trudged up to my room. I thought of any one who would have anything against these people. I had school the next day and I didn’t pay attention to anything. I got lunch detention but I was fine with it I was alone and it was quiet a perfect place to think. A new kid named Chris invited me to his house after school.
I arrive at his house and I smell a fresh scent of cinnamon it made me wish it was my house. His mother invited me warmly and gave me a cookie. I could tell she was trying to make a good impression, she leads me to his room where I waited for him to come from the bathroom. I went snooping around his room and found a box titled miscellaneous. I peek inside and see a devil mask and a python. He came in and saw me peeking. I bolt out his bedroom door and out the front door. I look behind me phew he want there. I run into the woods not realizing where I was going but, soon enough I found myself on a track that leads to my school football field. I look behind me one more time and the ugly devil face was right behind me.
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Duh duh duhhhhh try to post soon and the short story is coming to a close YAY and boo but.... i have a couple other books in progress so yayyyyyy!!! vote comment and read on ;)
