Here is chapter 4. I hope you guys enjoy it. Please vote for my book and comment.
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As the blur turned to focus, I saw...
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Gabriel Savier! Now that I saw his face clearly, ohhhh I melted. He was about 6 foot, had eyes were a beautiful aqua green, his hair was more dark brown than black, and smelt like ripe strawberries, he was a little but tan, had muscles that made me shiver and his lips were just perfect.
I thought I was in a dream because it all seemed too good to be true. But no I was definitely not dreaming because he was staring straight into my eyes which were covered by my hair stands.
He then stood up and offered his muscular hands to help up. Without thinking twice, I quickly took his hand and was gently pulled up withing a split second.
When I was standing I stared at the floor. I then started picking up my books. He also then started picking up my stuff.
When we had finished gathering everything he joked,
"How many things do girls carry in their bags?"
I laughed at this. I stopped laughing when I saw him smirking at me. I then looked down blushing and putting 2 hair strands behind my ear so that my right eye could be seen. We stood in silence for a while.
Then he cleared his throat breaking the silence and said,
"You have a beautiful laugh."
This sent shiver straight down my spine and straight up again. I looked up at him rubbing the nape of his neck as if shy to have said so.
I looked at him with the eye that wasn't blocked with hair and responded shyly
"Thanks."
we then stared at each other for a long period. He then smirked again and shyly confessed,
"Sorry I might seem like a weirdo, but your eyes are beautiful."
I was melting from head to toe. He was anything but a weirdo.
If it wasn't for the honk that interrupted that magical moment, I would have melted to death!
HOOOOONNNKKK!!!!!
"That's my ride." I finished pointing to the door.
He then gave me my books and I walked to the exit. As I was walking, I remembered I hadn't said thank you for his help. So I turned and said
"Thanks for the help."
He smirked and commented,
"Any time."
And with that I was gone. When I was outside, I stopped in search of my mom's car. There it was at the far end of the parking lane that was inside my school. I walked hastily.
When I got to the car, I kissed Mon hello on the cheek, and sat quietly blushing. I think my mom knew that I had met a boy because for the whole ride no one spoke a word, but the smile on my mom's face never left.
When we got home I rushed to my room and shut the door. I then ran and jumped onto my big, comfortable water bed.(don't worry I also had a real bed)
I then stared at my ceiling which was covered in violet butterflies
I then thought of how he called my eyes and my laugh beautiful. Beautiful? I wondered. Could it be be? Was I really beautiful? Could me and him ever be....
No I was getting way too ahead of my self. I mean why would he ever like me? I am nothing. But him? No. He was perfect.
He was an angel.
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