Interlaced Feelings-Poems

True Love is worth Waiting( Glossary)

Hi friends, I think I have to give explanation for the last poem, so that you can understand the poem in a better way..

I wrote this poem like a conversation between a rose and me.I had compared the prick of the rose's thorn to  the pain felt when someone very close to us leave..But of course it can't be compared to any pain..

I saw a beautiful rose...

It gave me pleasure

Though I was amidst woes.. (Woes - sorrows)

My pain!! None can measure..

I slowly touch   (I touched the rose)

Not with the intention to hurt..

It pricked me!! Ouch

Why did you do that?, I blurt   (Blurt- to speak quickly or without thought)

The rose smiled

Is it badly paining..?           (In these lines, the rose is smiling and asking  "Is it paining badly?"  with a sarcasm.Because it knows very well  that the pain which I m undergoing, when my lover left, is more painful)

I nodded like a child

And tears started raining..

Oh Baby!! Don't cry...

I didn't mean to harm.

Please make your eyes dry..

But I can't make you warm..

 (Here the rose is trying to make me alright.The last line " But I can't make you warm", means it can't make me alright by being with me because it will prick me more..I had compared this with the words of my lover when he left. He said he can't do anything..)

Ah!! Again the same words

Used by my sweet heart when he left..

Which pricked me like a sword.

Which killed me in bereft.. ( Bereft-pained by the lost of loved ones)

I scolded the rose badly..

But it laughed loudly..

Here I scolded the rose very badly, but the rose is laughing at me because I couldn't scold my lover,though he gave me pain more than this rose)

I know the prick is not deep

Like the wound in your heart

Then why do you sneap.. (Sneap- to blast)

It's he who tear you apart.

No!! My Prince won't leave

I will wait for him

He can't see me in grieve

He will come back with a glim... (Glim - A light, candle,brightness, splendor)

~ Irfaan Meera

Thanks a lot for reading....With love...Please vote and comment. I explained it for you...