Hi guys I'm trying to make the story better with awesome and long chapters___chapter details chapter starts when last chapter ended with Ben's view___________***______
Can we save her I said your right but we don't know where she is Mary said it must be jazz and his dad Joe says no Jim it is master shedder(I will explain about him in next chapter) Mary's dad said but they sealed him with powerful magic Joe says Joe master shedder have dark magic he can survive any magic Mary's dad says what's going on who is master shedder I asked Ben I will tell you later for now he is evil than jazz's dad Joe says
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I will kill the king of magicland and all royal family and win magicland and everyone will fear me and when I have u they will not attack h e said you will die when I got my powers back and you will pay for it I says curse of darkness he casted a dark spell _____
How was this chapter is it better
