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Have you ever seen it?
The Darkness in Light
The sun in the rain
The love in pain
How opposites attract
The racer running of track
That is the darkness in light
The slight sorrow in a smile
The genius of a child
How sweet is the sour
As fast as the hour
The shortness of life
The countdown of time
The Darkness in light
Is the reality in fantasy
It is the blind eye of those who can see
The joy in death
The selfishness to help
The feeling that you are crowded when you are all by yourself
Have you ever seen it?
The Darkness in light
I know you have
We all have
Once in a life time, maybe twice
All of us have seen it; the darkness in light