I am thinking that I am going to be redoing the whole of this story.
I need would appreciate tips and pointers from everyone who has been reading this book so that i can make it more interesting.
In order to give me your feedback, just comment on this part of everything and let me know what you are thinking.
If I take interest in your idea, I will shoot you a private message. If i dont send you a private message, know that I still do, very much, appreciate your input and will try my very, very hardest to incorporate all the ideas that my readers post for me to see.
Comment soon, please!
Love you all!
~JDB
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The Water (on hold D= )
Mystery / ThrillerJustine Baxter is a girl from southern Colorado. She and many other honors students have been chosen to complete their senior and college freshman years at an elite University in the South East Tennessee Mountains. However, there is strange scene in...
