Fourtris no war

Chapter two

DISCLAIMER: as much as I would like to be Veronica Roth, I'm not so the credit goes to her.

Christina barges into the room one minute before the alarm goes off. I hear a
'Aww, you two are so cute together'but then I hear a 'TRIS!!! GET UP!!! WE ONLY HAVE FORTY SIX MINUTES UNTIL THE PARTY!!!'
'How did you get my apartment number Christina???'Tobias shouts.
'Max knows everything...'says Christina 'c'mon tris, we need to do your makeup! We dont have time for shopping because you were sleeping with number boy here!'

I finally give in. She is either going to drag me out of bed or throw a bucket full of water at me if I don't.
'Ugh, fine. I will get up then.'

Forty six minutes later

'Come on Christina! We are going to be late!' I say frustratedly.
'We won't be late. Everyone else is just early!'she says passing me the mirror 'okay. I'm done'
Wow is all I can think. She made me look pretty.

'Come on, let's go'

At the party

'My place! I go first' says Zeke searching for his first victim. I see playful revenge in his eyes so I'm guessing he is going to pick Uriah.
'My dear brother, Candor or dauntless?'

'Dauntless! I ain't no pansycake!!'he says.
'I dare you to get a tattoo that says 'I ain't no pansycake!' On the back of your neck.'
'Easiest dare ever'
Hahaha I think I know what is coming...

Ten minutes later

Uriah runs into the apartment shouting 'look over here all ye pansycakes! Have you seen my tattoo?!'
On the back of his neck it says:

I am a pansycake

We are all laughing so hard it hurts but Marlene has to ruin it and take a picture and show it to him.

'OMG ZEKE! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY BEAUTIFUL NECK!!!'
Shouts a frustrated Uriah 'YOU ARE PAYING TO GET IT REMOVED!!!'

'Lets just get on with the game guys'Lynn says and everyone agrees.

'Lynn, Candor or dauntless?'Uriah asks.
'Dauntless'
'I dauntless you to wait in Max's office and sit in his chair and when he walks in say 'I was expecting you''
'Okay! Let's go!'Lynn says.

  Many stupid dares later

It is four o'clock in the morning and I'm starting to get a bit tired.
'Guys it is quite late and I'm getting tired so four and I are going home.'I say, yawning.
I hear mumbles of 'yeah, me too' and 'we are going home too's.

Tobias and I walk to our apartment which is only a few doors down so it's not that far. When we get in I get some tablets for the morning as Tobias has had a few too many drinks. He has passed out on the bed so I put the tablets on his bedside table and hop into bed next to him and fall into a dreamless sleep.

How do you think that was? I'm not sure so can you comment on things that can be improved please.

THANKS:)