Damn

Yea..

During all the action that happened in lunch school was still strolling around. Okami came in her last class of the day creative photography 20 minutes late. The actual teacher Mrs. Aubrey wasn't there, which gave Okami so much joy. When she walked in everyone stopped what they where doing and just stared at her, she felt so uncomfortable.
Okami's head: *sigh* perfect.... Like I highkey don't understand these dumbasses, y'all see me every other fucking day. Stop staring at me..... I was fat yesterday, I'm fat today, and I know for a damn fact I'll be fat by tomorrow..... And look at this these faggots done took my seat too df am I gonna sit now bruh, ugh!!! On god I hate these people.
As she finished signing her name on the sign in sheet, she went straight to the back of the class room on the left corner by the window, she wanted no eye contact with anyone at all. 7 minutes into the class went by then Okami started to hear some people whispering. "Lol look at her shoes bruh them Nikes is so dirty" a girl said, "Aye bruh chill you gone have Donny over here kickin to ass" another one added. Then the first girl said out loud "FUCK DONNY RODRIGUEZ, he can't be around fighting all his dogs battle df" she stared dead at Okami to see if she'll turn and say something, but she didn't all Okami did was stared out the window. Everyone knows she heard the two people talking but she did nothing instead she put a smirk on her face and said "idiots" under her breath. The rest of the period went by with everyone minding their own businesses patiently waiting for the bell to ring. As people started packing the bell rang, everyone left the room including the sub Okami was the last to leave. Okami started walking off school ground, then out of nowhere someone was calling her from a far she stopped in confusion and turned around, Henry was running towards her. Henry is a 5'11, deep voice Dominican football player with long soft brown hair with blonde tips, slight facial hair on his chin, and a not so grown mustache, highly known around the school, and almost every girls man crush Monday. "Wassup" he said catching his breath. "Uhhh. Hi....um Henry." She said confused, he chuckles "why you look so confused?" "Maybe because I am... We've never met physically and never talked to one another."she said. "Oh my fault, I ain't mean pop up like that I just wanted to vibe with someone today." "Vibe? What am I a lucky number?" As they continued to walk and talk Okami was so confused with what was going on. They came to a stop when they hit the corner. "Aye look I know I was the last person you'd expect to be talkin to for the past timing but I not gone lie we can vibe from time to time." Henry said. Okami looked away and mouths the word vibe. "Vibe? Meaning hang out... Why now all of a sudden?" She said. "how bout I text you later and explain why. Lemme see ya pipe real quick." As Okami hands Henry her phone he does the same with his. She put her number on his and Vice versa, they gave each other back their phones, hugged each other and went their separate ways.

Guys tell me how you feel, if it need improvement, or how you feel about the characters, anything honestly I really wanna know..