life with one direction

the picknick at palm beach

Beatrice's pov:
As soon as we made it out of the airport which by the way was crammed with paparazzi and fans
We made our way to the house.

Harry:
Hey girls get your bikinis on were going to the bech that is on home and away!

Louis:
Fun fact in reality it's called Palm Beach. But on Home and Away it's called Summer Bay!

Primrose's pov:
My sweet little son's are just learning to walk. Their a bit wobbly on their legs but that is normal. And Bj is learning to speek he can say dada and mama.

Niall:
Hey Bj try and say Harry!

Bj:
Haey.

Harry:
Your really close just missed out the r's

Bj:
Haey.

Casper:
D..

Niall:
Hey Primrose Casper is about to say his first words!

Primrose:
I'm a coming.

Harry's pov:
As I'm help Nialler get the little tykes in to their swimming trunks. I set Casper down letting him play with his toys and Bj started to try and say my name. It's just to adorable the way he said it. I guess to him I'm Haey. And as Casper is sitting in his swimming trunks playing with his alphabet blocks he is now trying to say something.

Casper:
Dwdy?

Niall:
Way'ta go mate.

Harry:
Wikked ausie accent impression Niall!

Niall:
Cheers mate.

Primrose:
I'm ready to go.
Niall are the leprechauns ready?

Niall:
Yep they are all ready.
I've packed buckets and spades for them I also packed the picknick.

Liam:
The car seats have been put in the car and the pushchairs are in the boot.

Louis:
I got the arm bands, floaties, ruber rings and the beach balls.

Zayn:
All we need now is ourselves in the car.
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Palm beach

Louis:
Aw candy apples we left the surf boards.

Liam:
Their in the trunk lou.

Harry:
Phew.

Niall:
Lads prepear the pushchairs!

(Niall dose a rocket impression when he picked up each of his sons placing them in their pushchairs)

Beatrice:
Awe I just love Bj's giggles it makes me feel all giggly!

Primrose:
Casper and Bj shurly have their dads laughter.

Beatrice:
And Connell has your sense of humor and your laughter.

Louis:
Don't look now but the little tykes have both yours and Nialler's appetite.

Primrose:
As soon as Louis said that I looked over to them only to find Niall trying to eat everyone else's food,
Bj trying to eat the buckets,
Casper trying to eat the shovels and Connell is eating Harry's hair.

Zayn:
Er Harry don't look now but one of your cookie monsters of a nephew is trying to eat your hair!

Niall:
Like father like son. I'm so proud.

Liam:
Says the one eating everything edible in sight.

Beatrice:
Hey Niall you have three minni you and Primrose's I mean Bj is trying to eat a bucket, Casper is trying to eat the shovels and Connell is eating my boyfriend's hair!

Louis:
Hey Harry when are you gonna propose to Beatrice?

Harry:
Louis Louis Louis. Ever heared the saying curiosity killed the cat?

Louis:
Nope !!

Primrose's pov:
As we're all sitting on the sand having lunch I notice Louis asking Harry something.!

Zayn's pov:
As I had finished my sandwich I offered to help with feeding my nephews. So as Niall, Primrose and I feed the boys. Liam started packing away the picnic when we notice that Louis and Harry are wispering to one another.

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