Fallen Under

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What is the diffrence between the one you love and the one you'll do anything for? Nothing. What is the diffrence of lossing your life and lossing your life for someone else? Everything. This was what ran thru my head as I edged toward the cliff. Looking down into the place the would hold my biggest secret. The way I die. But maybeIi should tell you the whole story. Before I end it.

My name is Deliah Wright. I was just your everyday teenager. I had my friends and my family. My schoolwork and my softball.No boyfriend. Didn't need one.Atleast that's what I thought. Unti he walked in the room. I never thought I would love someone like him. But I never thought I would die for someone like him either. But it wasn't love at first sight. Not even close. I could tell he was full of himself the moment I layed eyes on him. They way he walked and the way he chuckled while the girls "Ohhhed" over him. "Patheic." I said to Kaylle. "He just thinks he can walk into this school and he can have any girl he wantst" I roll my eyes for dramtic effect. "Well, that's kinda what happned." Kaylle said, biting into a apple as she glanced in his directon. "I mean, he's gorgeous!" she said while putting her unfinished apple into her lunchbag. " I know." I said, glaring into the back of her head as she waved at him playfully. "Doesn't mean he has to gloat about it." She looked in my direction and smiled. "Hey, don't worry. I'm sure this will ware down. Now, cool down that fire and let's get out of here before you hurt someone. I laughed. I felt the heat leave my cheeks. "Okay. I'm fine now. Let's blow this pop-stand and try to find Ben before I go and rip "Pretty boy" Carter's head off." She laughed and we walked out of the lunchroom leaving Carter and all those drolling girls behind.

Chapter 2/ Carter's POV

I saw her from across the lunchroom. Her and her friend we're talking and glancing in my direction. She  caught my eye earlier. The way her wavy blondish brown hair framed her face was a site to see. I tried to ignore her. Because it was obvious that she wasn't falling over me like all the other girls in this school. This has never happned. Everywhere I went there was never a girl who didn't fall for my looks. I am really good at my job! I can't help it!. Why isn't she falling for my tricks? I must find out. All day I couldn't stop thinking about her. I would approach her at lunch and find out why she doesn't find me attractive.There must be some kind of reason she isn't falling over me. There has to be.

I sat at the lunch table with my new "friends". I didn't think of them as friends though. I would never see them again as soon as my job was done. I searched the lunchroom for the girl with the waves. She was at the table with her friend. Staring at her friend with the red streaks angrily as she waved at me. I laughed and flashed a smile. "Hey guys." I said to the group catching every single person's eyes with just the sound of my voice. One of my many talents that come with being what I am. "i'll be right back." I said winking at one of the many girls at the table. She giggled very loudly as all the other girl glowred at her with jelousy in their eyes. I stood up to head in the direction of the girl with the wavy hair. But she had left the overly crowded lunch room. Where had she gone? I thought very angrily to myself. Something came over me and I began to run after her.

Chapter 3/Deliah's Point of View

We decided to spend the rest of our lunch period outside. The cold damp air splattered my face as we opened the giant doors. It wasn't as crowded out here as it was inside due to the cold air come from the beach just a couple of miles away. Most people didn't like the fact that the sschool was so close to our town's murky ocean but I loved it. The smell of it, the feel of it. It's what kept me going when all else failed. The sun peeked thru the clouds and warmed our chilled bodies as we walekd towards Burgers and Fries, the small fast food resturant acroos the street, to pick up some milkshakes. "Hey," Kaylle said with a smile on her face. "Since you don't like Carter, can I have him?" I rolled my eyes. "Sure, if you really want a stuck up jerk who only...."  I was cut off short my the feel of someone running into me. I crashed to the sidewalk. I felt the pain rush thru my leg. "OOOOWWW!!!" I scream. "What was that?!" I said standing but lossing my balance on the way up and falling again. "Deliah..." Kaylle said, offring a hand to help me up. I took it and  brushed myself off. then blinked mutiple times to make myself belive that I really saw what was in front of me. It was Carter. And he was on the ground. Not breathing.

Chapter 4/Carter's POV

As I began to run, I couldn't seem to stop for anything! My whole body was focused on getting to her. I have never felt this feeling before. i kept running and I began to lose my breath. I stopped to catch it and I did a double-take as I looked in the corner. I saw him. The one person who was out to get me. The one reason I hated my job.  It was Kalstar. "Hello friend." He said staring at me with those dark, hollow circles that were considered his eyes. " It wasn't that hard to find you. A small town near the ocean. Where you always tend to go, all I had to do was track your scent." He laughed. "It was very fishy." I stood there. Mad at myself for whatever that feeling was to take over me and leave me vunerbale. "What do you want Kalstar?" i said with bitterness in my voice. "Why, what I always wanted. You  gone." He shot something at me and I went flying towards the other side of the school. I was lossing my breath as I flew. Knowing I was going way to fast for anyone to notice me. Now all I had to do was pray I didn't hit anyone. I could feel my heart rate slowing and my mind slowing down. then i felt a crash. and it all went blank.

I woke up with blurry vision and distressed voices circled my head. "Is he okay? PLEASE tell me he's okay!" " I don't KNOW Deliah. Please just shut-up and let me find out." I opened my eyes. I saw two girls pacing in front of me. No big suprise. But then I saw who that girl was. and I felt anger gurgle in my throat. I stood up. and began walking. "and where do you think you're going?" the girl with the wavy hair said. "Away." I said being to be rude but it coming out weak. "Well you can't just walk away aftere something like that happing. You we're dead for goodness sake!" she screamed. 'No biggie." i said smiling. Knowing I would get a reaction out of this. " What do you mean "No biggie"?" she said using air quations. "YOU DIED!"  I looked at her with a menaiful gaze. Letting her know if she kept this up she would be getting into something not really worth getting into. She nodded and that's all I needed to see. "Deliah." she said holding out her hand. I took it. "Carter.".

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