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|Story Start|
|Shaylee Love|
“So you like him?”
“Yes”
“The full on more-than-friends feeling?”
“Yes”
“Are you sure?”
“Yes Avery I’m pretty damn sure!”
Avery squealed and tackled me onto the bed. I let out a small scream and landed with a soft ‘oomph.’ “FINALLY! Do you even know how long I’ve been waiting to hear you say that?” she demanded. I blushed and shoved her off of me “Shut up Aves” I groaned, sticking my tongue out at her in a childish manor. Avery rolled her eyes and gave me a small smirk “So… when are you going to tell him?” she asked. I threw a pillow at her face and gave her a small glare “Never! That would be so embarrassing!” I exclaimed. Avery rolled her eyes “What are you talking about? It’s obvious that you two are meant to be” she said. I sighed and shook my head “He’s a player Aves, I just don’t want to get my heart broken” I murmured softly. Avery laughed “Really Shay? That’s your excuse? You know as well as I do that’s bullshit, Xavier’s only ever had eyes for you.” She countered.
I sighed “I wouldn’t say that but he hasn’t been with anyone since he got back…” I mused. Avery scoffed and nodded her head “He was never with anyone, he used to be a flirt but he never had any relationships, do you know why?” she pressed, I shrugged and hugged Teddibea to my chest “All the girls at school are witches?” I questioned. Avery chuckled and bumped her shoulder with mine “No, it’s because he finally has the balls to claim what’s always been his” she answered softly, giving me a smile. I scrunched my face up in confusion “What do you mean?” I asked. Avery shook her head “Never mind, now come on we need to sexify you. Got to look good for your man!” she teased instantly springing from a mellow mood to an energetic one. I blushed and rolled my eyes “Avery!” I exclaimed. She giggled and shoved me into the shower “Go and clean up! I have the perfect outfit for you!” she exclaimed.
I rolled my eyes, I would ask more about what she meant later. For now I think it’s best if I just listened to what she said, besides there’s no harm in wanting to look good… right?
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Next Door To The Player- Old Version
Teen FictionTHIS IS THE OLD VERSION OF NDTTP. IT IS UNFINISHED AND UNEDITED. IF YOU WANT TO READ SHAYLEE AND XAVIER'S ADVENTURE; THE NEW REWRITTEN VERSION IS RECOMMENDED. "Mother please tell me you're joking!?" I asked her as panic started to rise within me. S...