Hey ya! Everyone. This is my first story ever. Rather I'm writing for the first time.
so please read it. and you are welcomed for the suggestions. Do tell me if the story is good, it matters a lot to me. I will only continue writing it, if you guys would like it.
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What do you people think about true love? Does it exist?
Some may say no and some yes.
Well, if you say no... Let us make you believe in love, true love.So here is my story of a fun loving but a messed up girl, whose family is weird as hell and has a history which is untold, and on the other part we have an innocent and rich American boy with some magical powers.
So let us go ahead, read the story and find about this untold tale of love.
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I'm late. I'm late. I need to find Jack.
Clash!
I bumped into someone, spilling all the coffee that person had and burning his finger."SHIT! shit! shit! shit! shit! "
"WHAT THE HELL!" He exclaimed.
"I'm sorry. I'm so so soo sorry. Are you alright? Shit! Does it hurt?"
And without thinking anything I took his hand and put his burned finger in the ice-cream mug I had, so that he doesn't feel the hot coffee and doesn't get burn. When he started protesting by pulling his hand from my grip, I looked up at him to give him a glare...
But,
OH MY GOD!
They are the most beautiful eyes I've laid my eyes on. And suddenly I feel that thunder build inside me. The only contact between us, our hands, now was sending current all over my body. I only realized that I was staring at him when he shouted, "What the hell are you doing? Leave my hand" with a disgusted glare.
I don't know where those guts came from, but I rather tightened my grip on his hand, just to tell him I'm not going to leave and I'm not intimidated by him or by his glare. I just said, "Don't worry. You will be fine. It won't burn. You won't hurt".
And one, two and three, I take his finger out of the mug.
"Lick it up", I ordered him.
"What? I'm not going to lick", he said, again with the same disgusted glare. Only this time it was more disgusted and bit surprised too.
I don't know why he was surprised though.
"Just shut up and lick it or I'm going to do that".
He now gave me even more surprised look.
But, lastly I won and he obeyed by licking the ice-cream on his finger. I then inspected his finger carefully to make sure he wasn't burn. And thankfully he wasn't. Though it relaxed me but still concerned, I asked him, "Does it still hurt?"
He simply said, "No" all time staring at me like I've grown two heads.
Still inspecting his finger I said, "Well then you are fine. You are not burned, and it won't hurt" with this I looked up and smiled and found him still staring at me. And I found out I can watch him too, for forever. I can watch his Cristal clear blue eyes, fleshy and rich lips, coiffed hair and sculpted face, for forever and can be completely lost in it.
And suddenly the file in my hand fell down, and I was reminded that I've to find jack. He must be waiting. "Shit" and I bend down to pick up the file and then turned to continue to my way towards Jack.
Just then a manly voice stopped me.

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love story
De TodoHey! this is my first book. I'm posting here just to know if it is good to continue or not. it's a simple love story, hope you would like it. please read it and suggest me.