I went to sleep and I was in a brownish orange type place. Im not entirely sure because everything was so blurry. I could feel my teeth clench I couldnt control it. It just did like it was an one of those things that your body does automaticly because it has to. I soon gain control of my mouth. I saw alot of shadows pass by I couldnt tell if they were human or some unholy creatures. I was frightened I had no Idea what was going on I didnt know if this was real or if it was a dream. I was going insane thinking about it.c I saw a shadow figure quickly dash towards me. It got closer. What were its intentions I thought. It got closer. I was getting scared. My palms were sweating I couldnt move. I tried to scream but all that came out was a "eep." It got closer It reached its hands out to grab me. felt a hot feeling in my below the belt area. Did I just pee myself? I thought. It grabbed me then I woke up. I did pee myself I realized as I looked down at my pants there was a big wet spot on me and the bed. "My moms gonna kill me Im 13 years old and I just wet the bed." I got up and changed my pants. I turned around and the bathroom door swung open. A dark figure came towards me. It came closer it was a foot away from me. "W-what do you want?" I stammered. It didnt respond. "Please dont kill me!" I yelled. It reached out for me then I realized what it was. It was my older brother jeff. "jeff stop it." He took off the dark clothes. " oh my gosh you were like please dont kill me hahahaha!" he said laughing his fundie off. "Jeff thats not funny!" I yelled. jeff was 16 years old he always wore a plain blue t-shirt and blue jeans that were usally ripped in the knee area. I was 13 and I wore a jean jacket with a black ops 2 t-shirt underneath and I wore gray sweat pants. I ran towards him flaing my arms. At him trying to punch him. I heared a light clicking on and footsteps i quickly jumped into the bed and pretended to be asleep. I heared footsteps enter my room. They quickly left. I was thinking about that dream i had. I decided to just forget about it and go to sleep. I got up mom and dad were probaly gone already. there scientists they study the universe. So they have to go to work early. So jeff usally fixes breakfast. I just hope he sticks to cearal today. The day before yesterday he fixed eggs with bacon and some toast. The eggs were slimy the bacon was burnt to a crisp and the toast was black all over. I didnt eat breakfast that day. He fixed some rice krispes. It was a quiet breakfast I ate my rice krispes and left for school. I met up with my friend dave along the way. Hes part indain you know not like india indian but comanche indian. "Hey dave I want to tell you something." "shoot." he said "Last night i had a strange dream." I explained the dream to him. 'you know sometimes dream are like visons of things that are to happen." he said. "pfft yeah right I told him." We didnt talk the rest of the way. It was boring at school as usual. We had to learn algebra and read charlottes web. BORING! So any way. Dave said there was an old abanoned insane asylum in town. So naturaly we go and check it out. I brought flash lights and dave brought glo-sticks just in case the battieres ran out. I handed him a flash light. oh by the way I almost forgot to mention how he looks he has short black hair and wears a blue long sleve shirt with jeans. So we looked around. It was spooky here. The walls were brownish orange. . I saw a shadow pass by I went to check it out. It led to a room. It was just a room with walls like the rest of the place. but the floor was covered in rust and what appeared to be blood. It smelled so bad like a dead rotting mouse but ten times worst. I noticed something on the wall writing. It read "Run if you dont leae he will come after you." I saw a shadow come towards me and dave. i saw go for dave first I dont want to explain the details its-its to terrible. It then came for me. This is it I thought. Im gonna die. it reached its hands out towards me. Everything turned red. Then it started to slowly fade to black and as I was falling I could feel something hot and wet form on the below the belt part of my pants.
The End.
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