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first love

My name is meme my sister is Kira my best friends is mya and Mia if you mess with us dang I feel bad for you cause we don't play that is your life .

Chapter 1
Me my sister and the twins and there husbands we was going to the mall first and the the club so i had on a pink and black crop top that said love with some black shorts my sister had on a blue crop top with black shorts the twins had on a yellow crop top with black shorts and we all had on black LeBron 's so we went to the club me and Chris use to work together but was not able to talk but he kept staring at me when we was there so he came over while everyone else was dancing so he came we had a small conversation .

Small conversation
Chris : hey meme
Me: hey Chris did I used to work with you
Chris :yes but anyways I wanted to ask you out
Me:are you for real
Chris :yes me and you baby and have I told you are beautiful
me: thanks
Chris : you welcome
Me:
Have I told you that you is so fine
Chris:so is that a yes or no
Me. :yes
Chris:okay I will see you later then so we can hang out
Me :her is my number

Chris:okay then I will see you later
me:okay bye then see you later.

Tell me how I did I tried