The One Who Isn't There

This is my first so give me a try!!!

Every once and a while I think about where did I come from, who is my family? I don't quite know if I'm going to make it out of here or not so I'm listening to what the tell me or try anyway. Hi my name is Emilia Jones I'm 14, school president, straight A student then one day something happened, something strange.!. I started hearing strange voices whispering in my ears telling me crazy things like kill people and shoot yourself just horrible things like that but when I asked for help they thought I was crazy. I went for a walk with my new baby pug, Jasper. I let him walk around for a while when I looked to me left and I seen something in the woods glowing, something blue shining bright. I try not to go to far because my group would be worried. I live in a nursing home my family dropped me off there at age two and I have served there since. Back to the glowy thing. I can't quite get close enough to see what it is so I try and tip toe my way through there when black shadows start flying around me in circles I start to float with a blue ball around my body when some ship came and picks me up?

When I wake back up I am strapped down to a table with tubes and IVs everywhere on me I pass out I wake back up in a straight chair in a dark room I just see tiny faint lights afar to my left when I think about my dog. "JASPER" I yell. When I here someone rushing towards me. "Shhhh don't worry my dear you will have your precious monkey soon" in an creepy robotic deep womanly voice.

Tell me if its good or not and I will finish