I just want to be normal

The sudden change

Dream realm

Fog layered over the muddy ground beneath my feet. I began walking forward seeing in the distance a small house. The scenery changed into a cute meadow in the forest the house on the other side of the clearing. I couldn't contain my unreasonable joy that filled my very being. Then I heard others beside me and a male voice " race you there " " your on." I replied before taking off to the cottage. I heard the footsteps of the other boy behind me then my heart beat drowned the rest as I sprinted and touched the door. I turned around to gloat about the boys defeat. When I do I see a young boy with bleeding eyes that were the same color as mine and blood stained hair. " awe darn maybe I can win next time huh"

Waking up

The dream faded into the background. The only noise I could hear was the soft humming of what seemed to be a girl. I tried opening my eyes but when I did I saw nothing. But I felt everything. I felt my breath stick to my dry throat and how scratchy my young use felt. I felt the clenching of my stomach as it twisted into hungry nots. I felt the cool air around my hit my unseeing eyes. " oh your awake. I should go tell daddy" a small feminine voice says. Surprisingly I began feeling her being and the vibration of her blood pumping through her. Then I felt her footsteps leave the room and the door lock behind her. I then felt another presence I stood from the bed swaying gently before I felt something else. I felt the warmth of the sun being faded by a cloth. I reached my hands up and found a blindfold over my eyes. ( had you going there didn't i. (•O•) )
I reached back and undid the fold only to find everything blurry. The only things I could make out clearly was a mirror on the other side of the room. A face lay in the picture. My face. Except it wasn't. My once blue eyes turned the irises crystal white with a gray outline and my eyes bleed red. I smiled and saw sharp teeth like a sharks. Then a grim reminder hit. IM HUNGRY AND CRAVING MEAT!!!!

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So yeah I decided to update. Please help I need feedback is this story any good